LIST FORMALNY- DO REDAKCJI GAZETY

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Proszę o sprawdzenie listu.
Podczas studiów w Anglii przeczytałeś w szkolnej gazetce stud., że twój uniwersytet zamierza zamknąć dyskusyjny klub filmowy działający przy szkole od wielu lat. Napisz list od gazetki:
1. Przedstaw się i określ cel listu.
2. Napisz o ważnej roli klubu w życiu studenckim i o jego długoletniej tradycji.
3. Podaj 2 powody, dlaczego klub nie powinien zostać zamkniety.
4. Zachęc czytelników do wyrażania opinii i wyraź nadzieje że klub nie zostanie zamknięty.

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am a student from Poland. The purpose of this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the views presented in your article. I feel interested in the subject of your article and I would like to share my views.
Films club is very important in student’s life. They can develop our creativity and imagination. The club was found in 1989, so in my opinion we keep still the tradition in our school.
Furthermore, the club is fantastic place where people meet a new friends. Also lot’s of students are interested about films, so they like talk about it.
I would like to hear from other young people and learn what they think about the subject. I hope, that the Films club will not closed.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
The purpose of this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the views presented in your article (ale gdzie go widziales, kiedy, tutaj trzeba napisac). I feel interested in the subject 'of your article' (wg mnie niepotr) and I would like to share my views.
'Films' (napisz FILM club is very important in (brask przedimka) student’s life. 'They' (tutsaj napisz wyraznie ze chodzi o filmy) can develop our creativity and imagination. The club was foundED in 1989, so in my opinion we CAN 'keep still' (toi znaczy calkowicie cos innego 'keep still'-nie ruszaj sie- pomysl) the tradition in our school.
Furthermore, the club is (brak przedimka) fantastic place where people meet 'a' (niepotr) new friends. Also 'lot’s' (dlaczego napisales to slowo z apost. to jest zwykle l. mn-LOTS) of students are interested 'about' (moze lepiej IN) films, so they like TO talk about 'it' (ale 'films' to l. mn- tutaj THEM).
I would ALSO like to hear from other young people and learn what they think about the subject. I hope(,) (niepotr przecinka) that the 'Films' (film) club will not BE closed.
Cytat: terri
The purpose of this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the views presented in your article (LAST WEEK).
Film club is very important in (THE) student’s life. The club was founded in 1989, so in my opinion we can (MAINTAIN) the tradition in our school.
Furthermore, the club is (A) fantastic place where people meet
czy wyrazy w nawiasach będą odpowiednie ?
Tak, przed "Film club" tez mi brakuje przedimka.

dissatisfaction with the views presented in your article last wekk albo from the last week.
week*
The purpose of this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the views presented in your article (LAST WEEK). (tu mialam na mysli dokladna date). Jak czytasz gazete i listy od ludzi, to tez chyba cytuja dokladne daty i nawet tytuly articles....
Film club is very important in (THE) (tutaj zly przedimek...ma byc A) student’s life. The club was founded in 1989, so in my opinion we can (MAINTAIN) (napisz to inaczej...continue to maintain) the tradition in our school.
Furthermore, the club is (A) fantastic place where people meet - ok
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