opinion essay

Being a celebrity.

Nowadays the whole World is connected with entertainment. Everyone watches films and keeps the track about Celebrities. They are also our icon. Most of us want to be like them. In my point of viev being a star is not as simple as it may looks like.
Firstly, people sometimes think that everything what famous people do in television is good, so they copy it and sometimes hurt themself's or what is worst their closest family or friend. Also celebrity's family have hard life,bocouse they are convicted for life which is imposed from others.
Secondly, they are dependent on people who help them to be a celebrity. They have to do, everything what someone said. Their private life is being opened for everyone, who only want to know. Gossips circle them from everywhere and almost always they bring lies. That can destroy their family or friendship.
On the other hand, they are rich. They can have everything, what they want, so probably their live is easier. They have a lot of people who can help them in finding job or give them oportunities to reach success.
All things considered live which is demonstrated in television or other media may pretend, but not everyone knows about it. People sometimes don't like their life so they are searchin for changes. In my opinion it is not worthless to be responsible and dependent in this way like Celebrities.

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Nowadays the whole 'world is connected with entertainment. (zdanie ok ale to nie jest prawda, bo sa ludzie ktorzy nie maja zadnego media w domu) 'Everyone' (nie, napisz MOST PEOPLE 'watches' WATCH films and 'keeps' KEEP 'the' (niepotr) track 'about' OF celebrities. They 'are' (nie, tutaj HAVE BECOME also our iconS. 'Most of us' (daj to inaczej...Most of THE YOUNG PEOPLE) want to be like them. In my point of 'viev' (ortog) being a star is not as simple as it may 'looks like' LOOK.
Firstly, people sometimes think that everything 'what' (kalka z polskiego 'co' tutaj THAT famous pople do 'in' ON television is good, so they copy it and sometimes hurt 'themself's' (to jest zle - tutaj ma byc l. mnA THEMSELVES or what 'is' MAYBE worsE their closest family or friendS. Also A celebrity's family 'have' HAS A hard life,'bocouse' (co to za slowo, napisz to poprawnie) they are 'convicted' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo) for life which is imposed from others.
They have to do, everything 'what' THAT someone 'said' SAYS. Their private life is being opened for everyone who 'only' (niepotr) wantS to know. Gossips ENcircle them from everywhere and almost always they bring lies.
They can have everything, 'what' (to juz 3ci raz, kiedy uzyles tego 'what' tutaj THAT they want, so probably their 'live' (daj tutaj rzeczownik a nie czasownik) is easier. They have a lot of people who can help them in finding A job or give them oportunities to reach success.
All things considered THE 'live' (popraw) which is demonstrated 'in' ON television or other media may BE pretendED, but not everyone knows about it. People sometimes don't like their life so they are 'searchin' (ortog)for changes. In my opinion it is not 'worthless' (zle slowo) to be responsible and dependent in this way like THE celebrities ARE.

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