Proszę o sprawdzenie o wegetarianizmie PROSZĘ

Vegetarianism is a healthy diet. I belive that is a true one and I’ll try to prove it. People who do eat meat often suffer from serious hart diseases. It is becouse meat contains dangerous fats, that make make a bad cholesterol grow up and as a result, our veins are getting thinner. Blood doesn’t have enough place to move ahead and clogs up. This may even ends up In a hospital. Next thing is more delikate like ethic and even religion. Many people don’t want to kill animals and in addition eat them. It is simply cruelty and unfairness towards creatures, that are, in some sense, quite close to us. Of course, there also disadvantages of vegetarianism. One of them is the balance of nutritional, it turns out to be much harder to keep our nutrients in proper quantity, after giving up eating meat. But, it isn't impossible. There are natural substitutes for example soia beans or lentils and also multivitamins that help us implement any kind of shortages. In conclusion vegetarianism is as a definitely beneficial diet. Even if we don’t mind killing animals, nor have any ethical perceptions. We should care about our health. Inside meat there are a load of antibiotics, hormones and other additions, which terrible influence on our health state.

Vegetarianism 'is' (nie pisz samego 'is' bo to znaczy, ze jestes na 100% pewna ze to jest prawda, musisz pomyslec o ludziach ktorzy sie z toba nie zgadzaja, lepiej..'is considered') TO BE a healthy diet. I 'belive' (ortog) that (tutaj cos brakuje) is a 'true one' (nie rozumiem uzycia tych slowo tutaj) and I’ll try to 'prove' ('prove' jest za silne slowo- moze 'explain) it. People who do eat meat often suffer from serious 'hart' (ortog) diseases (kto tak mowi, sa badania na ten temat?) . It is 'becouse' (popraw to slowo, ono nie istnieje w jez. ang) meat contains dangerous fats, (np jakie?) that make make a 'bad' (co to znaczy 'bad'?) cholesterol 'grow up' (zle okreslenie popraw) and as a result, our 'veins are getting thinner' (to nie jest exactly prawda, 'our veins get clogged up with fat). Blood doesn’t have enough 'place' (zle slowo) to move 'ahead' (daj slowo 'on') and 'clogs up' (nie, blood nie moze 'clog up' bo wtedy masz zawal). This may even 'ends' (zla koncowka czasownika, gdzie masz 3os.l.poj?) up in a hospital (ale nie piszesz w jaki sposob i kto?) . Next thing is more 'delikate' (ortog) 'like' (nie uzywaj tego slow w ten sposob, tutaj 'such as') ethicS and even religion.
It is 'simply cruelty' (cos tu nie tak, mozna 'simple cruelty', albo 'simply cruel') and unfairness towards creatures, that are, in some sense, quite close to us. Of course, there (brak slowa)also disadvantages of vegetarianism. One of them is the balance of nutritional (ale nutricional CO?) czego?), it turns out to be much harder to keep our nutrients in 'proper' (co to znaczy?) quantity, after giving up eating meat.
There are natural substitutes for example 'soia' (ortog) beans or lentils and also multivitamins that help us implement any kindS of shortages. In conclusion vegetarianism is 'as' (nie rozumiem uzycia 'as' tutaj) a definitely beneficial diet.
Even if we don’t mind killing animals, nor have any ethical perceptions. (to nie jest zdaniem, polacz z poprzednim)
Inside meat there are a load of antibiotics, hormones and other additions, which (brakuje slowa) (brak przedimka) terrible influence on our 'health state' (zla kol slow, 'state of health')