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Dear Margot

I have a problem and I don't know what to do. In the last week I was in the coffee shop. I have seen my friend's boyfriend with another girl! I think he betrays her.
I want to tell her, but she is very happy with him and I don't want make she sad.
I also think she won't belive me , because she know that I don't like this guy.
Maybe I have to talk with her boyfriend? Or maybe persuaded her to split up with him? What would you do if you were me?

Ann


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'In' (niepotr) 'the' (niepotr) Last week I was in 'the' (zly przedimek) coffee shop. I 'have seen' (simple) my friend's boyfriend with another girl! I think he 'betrays'(zly czas) her.
I want to tell her, but she is very happy with him and I don't want (brakuje slowa) make 'she' (zle slowo, 'she' to ona' a tutaj trzeba 'jej') sad.
I also think THAT she won't 'belive' (ortog) me, because she know that I don't like this guy.