Every day, (2 slowa) many people visits (people = l.mn) cinemas. <The> Cinemas HAVE BEEN <are> a part of our life (l.mn) since 1910, and I can not (wole "cannot") imagine life without them. But some people claims (people = l.mn) that <the> cinemas will soon be a thing of the past.
<To start with, everyday the...nie potrzebne> Cinemas (become...zly czas) more modern. We can watch 3D, or even 4D movies. HOWEVER, most <of> people cannot afford (to buy?)<for> three-dimensional televisions <at home> and A ticket to the cinema is not expensive.
What is more, thEse places are unique for me. We can (find there.. wymysl lepszy czasownik) wonderful climate (kalka z polskiego..popraw) with smell of the popcorn in the air.
Opponents of this view claim that cinemas are useless and not profitable. I cannot agree with this statement because we can see a movie in the cinema IMMEDIATELY after THE premiere; OTHERWISE, we WOULD have to wait for a couple of months to see it on DVD.
To sum up , <the> cinemas are not only a place where we can go to watch the movie. It (cinemas = l.mn) is (l.mn) also the place when (kiedy ? a nie gdzie?) we can meet with our friends or go for a date. It is [written in our tradition..nie bardzo rozumiem] and <the> cinemas definitely should not be closed down.