PROSZE O SPRAWDZENIE - LIST Z WAKACJI

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Dear Justyna!
How are you? I hope everything is OK. Sorry , I didn't wrote to you because I was on holiday in Spain with my friends.This is beautiful country!We stayed at hotel near Barcelona. The weather was good.It was sunny and very hot! Every day We had "plan Day" . Every Mornings We walked the streets. In the Afternoons We went to the beach and played volleyball. Int the evenings We went to eat. Spanish food is great! Sometimes We went to shop to buy clothes. It was the most interesting and funny holiday in my life!

Love
Kate


Z góry dziękuje :)
edytowany przez Pit123: 04 wrz 2011
Sorry , I didn't 'wrote' (pomysl nad tym) to you because I was on holiday in Spain with my friends. This is (a przedimek? ) beautiful country(!) (Po co ten wykrzyknik- na kogo chcesz krzyczec?) We stayed at (a gdzie przedimek? dalej w Spain?) hotel near Barcelona.
Every day 'We' (mala litera) had (brak przedimka) "plan Day" . Every 'Mornings' (mala litera i l. poj) 'We' (mala litera) 'walked the streets' (nie uzywaj tego, Kobiety ktore 'walk the streets' nazywa sie prosty.....). In the 'Afternoons' (dlaczego duza litera?) ' We' (mala litera) went to the beach and played volleyball. 'Int' (ortog) the evenings 'We' (tutaj potrzeba malej litery, dlaczego piszesz to 'we' duzymi?) went to eat.
Sometimes 'We' (popraw) went 'to shop' SHOPPING to buy clothes.
Dear Justyna!
How are you? I hope everything is OK. Sorry , I havn't written to you but I was on holiday in Spain with my friends.This is a beautiful country! We were staying in a hotel near Barcelona. The weather was good. It was sunny and very hot! Every day we had our day planned . Every Morning we walked the streets. In the afternoons we went to the beach and played volleyball. In the evenings we went to eat. Spanish food is great! Sometimes we went shopping to buy new clothes. It has been the most interesting and funny holiday in my life!

Love
Kate

Ja bym to tak napisal
pozdro

Dzieki wielkie :) duze litery to przez moja nie uwage :)
'(a gdzie przedimek? dalej w Spain?' dalej jest ze niedaleko Barcelony , a Barcelona gdzie ? ;)
Pozdrawiam :)

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edytowany przez ann0910: 04 wrz 2011
Ja juz poprawilam. Prosze nie pisac....walked the streets...bo to jak napisalam wyzej, znaczy, ze chodziliscie szukac klientow (sa panie ktore tym zajmuja sie zawodowo).
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