Unemployment

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I think that one of the biggest problem of the modern world is unemployment. A lot of people not only don't have any work, but also they don't have any other further prospects. What is more, the number of unemployed people is still increasing. To make the situation worse our government seems not to care about the situation of these people. They don't try to create new working places. Therefore the living conditions of unemployed are getting worse and worse. The workers who were fired without any reason are supposed to get the Unemployment Benefits. But it is a very small sum of money, so it is very difficult to survive with this amount. I would like to present some proposals how we can cope with the problem of unemployment.At first, I think that our government should provide greater support for small and medium enterprises. In this way they will be able to develop faster and soon they will provide more and more working places for unemployed people. Then, I think that our government should provide the wide educational offer, which gives the citizens the possibility to develop their own skills.. The other solution to deal with the problem of unemployment is trying to limit bureaucracy in establishing your own business.
To sum up, I would like to repeat that the problem of unemployment is very difficult to solve. If the new working places weren't be created, we wouldn't find the solution to this important problem.

A lot of people not only don't have any work, but also they don't have any 'other further' (to jest niepotr) prospects.
I would like to present some proposals OF how we can 'cope' DEAL with the problem of unemployment.
Then, I think that our government should provide 'the wide educational offer' (tego nie rozumiem) , which gives the citizens the possibility to develop their own skills.. The other solution WHICH MIGHT 'to' (niepotr) deal with the problem of unemployment is trying to limit bureaucracy in establishing your own business.
If the new working places 'weren't' (nie pisz tak, napisz w calosci i zrozumiesz ze wtedy cos tu nie tak.....'were not be'?) be created, we 'wouldn't' (to jest zly modal, tutaj 'will not') find the solution to this important problem.