Sentences to check - welcome to my web site.

Welcome to my web site.
This is a web site about my projects in disciplines of Computer Science (particularly C/C++/C#, Qt cross-platform GUI application framework, OpenGL cross-platform 2D and 3D graphips API) and Electronic (with multidisciplinary combinations of Mechanical, Control and Systems Diesign engineering) in oder to design, and manufacture my useful products.

Please check this sentences whether are okay, thanks :)

This is a web site 'about' (to jest za niskie slowo , moze lepiej DESCRIBING, ILLUSTRATING) my projects in THE disciplines of Computer Science (particularly C/C++/C#, Qt cross-platform GUI application framework, OpenGL cross-platform 2D and 3D 'graphips' (czy to jest poprawnie, myslalam ze to tu ma byc GRAPHICS) API) and Electronic (with multidisciplinary combinations of Mechanical, Control and Systems 'Diesign' DESIGN engineering) in 'oder' ORDER to design, and manufacture 'my' (to znaczy 'twoje' produkty, czy to sa twoje?) useful products.

Dokładnie, chodzi o moje produkty, tzn. użycie 'my' w końcówce zdania jest okay? czy proponujesz to napisać jakoś inaczej?

'my' jest ok.

Thank you very very much terri :)

Please check this sentence:

Recognition system and active tracking through the detection of human faces in real-time image sequence using the cameras.
(tłum. System rozpoznawania i aktywnego śledzenia człowieka poprzez detekcje twarzy w czasie rzeczywistym w sekwencji obrazu przy pomocy kamer.)

Cos mi to ang. zdanie nie za bardzo sie podoba. Moze ...
Recognition system and active tracking 'through' (by?) the detection of human faces in real-time image 'sequence' (sequencing?) using the cameras.