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Nowadays people can't life without the Internet. They spend a lot of time online., for example: they are talking with frends, meet new people, work, do shopping. For somebody it's the way to escape of problems and their lifes. They ofen pretend to be someone who they aren't, because they don't accept themselves. On the internet they pretend perfect, strong, brave person.
In reality they are weak, timid, are have complex. They want to valorize. Online they feel anonymous, they don't need to take responsibility. They write in the forums and insult people because they want them to feel better. Write slander about celebrities, because they envy their fame and money. They create websites which will provide false images, to ridicule someone. They often don't know, are breaking the law.
Someone when borke-up with partner want to hurt him or her to suffer the same. Provide private photos. I think these people are very unhappy and they need professional help.
Nowadays people can't 'life' (tutaj potrzebujesz czasownik a nie rzeczownik) without the Internet. They spend a lot of time online., for example: they are talking with 'frends' (ortog), meetING new people, workING, doING THEIR shopping. For somebody it's the way to escape 'of' (niepotr) problems and their 'lifes' (popatrz jak piszemy l. mn). They ofen pretend to be someone who they 'aren't' (napisz to w calosci), because they don't accept themselves. On the internet they pretend TO BE (brak slowa) perfect, strong, brave person.
In reality they are weak, timid, are have (brak slowa) complex. They want to 'valorize' (zle slowo). Online they feel anonymous, they don't need to take (brak slowa) responsibility. They write 'in' ON the forums and insult people because they want 'them' (tutaj nie jest jasne o kim mowa, czy o tych 'people' czy o ludziach z tej strony) to feel better. (kto? co?) write 'slander' (popraw) about celebrities, because they envy their fame and money. They create websites which 'will' (niepotr) provide false images, to ridicule someone. They often don't know THAT THEY are breaking the law.
(brak slowa) someone 'when' (niepotr) WHO HAS 'borke-up' (ortog) with (brak slowa) partner want to hurt him or her to suffer the same. (kto? ) provide private photos.