pilnie prosze o poprawienie bledow w liscie ..

witam ;) mam ogromna prosbe moglby ktos z was sprawdzic mi bledy w liscie bo zapewne takie sa a dodam ze mialam dosc dluga przerwe z jezykiem i musze sie uczyc na nowo dlatego prosze o pomoc ;)

temat listu taki

Napisz list na temat kultury do swojego angielskiego kolegi . zamiesc informacje na tematy
jak sie witamy i zegnamy
gdzie i kiedy stoimy w kolejkach
zamawianie i placenie w barach kawiarniach i restauracjach
uzywanie publicznego transportu
zaproszenia
dawanie napiwkow
kontakt wzrokowy i gesty


Dear John

How are you? Thanks for your last letter and your photo.I am writing to describe you my country. I am from Poland and I love my nationality.In my country we serve hand and we are kissing in cheek on greeting.We use a lot of phrases for example good morning, hello , hi, servus, welcome, good evening ,good bye, bye bye itd. Poland is a very crowded country . We are standing in the quecue in the cinemas, bars , offises and medical clinics very often. Roads is very crowded.We are standing in traffic jams.Ordering and paying in cafe's , bars and restaurants isn't trouble.We are fresh and delicious food and nice service.Meals is very cheap and tasty.Something about public transport:
We use city buses, trams and trains.It is a cheap and practical means of transport .but sometimes delayed.We sending invitations for weeding , baptism and different banquets.Polish people are very hospitable but we rarely give tips because we save money and our earns is too enough.
We are smiling often and we are looking into the eyes of someone who we like.We avoid eye contact when we are as hamed and when someone caught our of cheating.Could you write me something about your country?I will wait for your letter

Best regards

XYZ

I am writing to describe (to cos brak) you my country. I am from Poland and I love my 'nationality' (nie, 'nationality to 'narodowosc' , jak chcemy pisac o narodowosci to piszemy, ze I am proud) .In my country 'we serve hand' (tego nie rozumiem) and we 'are kissing' (tutaj simple) 'in' (nie, nie tak, ON THE) cheek on greeting (ale kogo?) .We use a lot of phrases for example good morning, hello , hi, servus, welcome, good evening ,good bye, bye bye 'itd' (a kiedy do kogos mowilam 'itd'?) .
We 'are standing' (simple) in the 'quecue' (ortog) in the cinemas, bars , 'offises' (ortog) and medical clinics very often. 'Roads is' (a od kiedy dajemy czasownik l. poj do rzeczownika l. mnogiej, w polskim tez tak robisz?) very crowded.We 'are standing' (simple) in traffic jams. Ordering and paying in 'cafe's' (dlaczego masz tutaj apostrof?) , bars and restaurants 'isn't trouble' (tego nie rozumiem).'We are fresh' (my jestesmy fresh?- cos tu nie tak) and delicious food and nice service. 'Meals is' (znowu mieszasz l. mn z poj) very cheap and tasty.
Something about public transport: ...czy to jest zdaniem?
'It' (ale wymienilas wiecej jak jeden srodek, to chyba powinna byc l. mn) is a cheap and practical means of transport , but sometimes (tutaj cos brak) delayed. We 'sending' (simple) invitations for 'weeding' (zle slowo, 'weeding to jest plewanie w ogrodku - sprawdz) , baptism and different banquets.Polish people are very hospitable but we rarely give tips because we save money and 'our earns is too enough' (tego nie rozumiem).
We 'are smiling' (simple) often and we 'are looking' (simple) into the eyes of someone whoM we like.We avoid eye contact when we are as 'hamed' (ortog popraw) and when someone caught 'our' (to jest zle slowo) 'of' (niepotr) cheating.

just 'off the record', ok ;
..describe my country to you.