Krótki opis Krakowa

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Witam,
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Cracow is situated by Vistula second largest city in Poland. It was also second Poland’s capital. Its rich history and culture should be known for all Polish. Also foreigners appreciate beauty of Cracow. In 2006 it was one of five most popular cities of Europe.
Cracow is home of many historical buildings and monuments such as The Wawel Royal Castle, Wawel Cathedral, the Old Town, Main Market Square and Sukiennice Cloth Hall. There are 11 big theatres and several small, often situated in moody cellars in Cracow. You can do many other things in this historical city, for example visit Museum of Japanese’s Art and Culture Manggha or Czartoryski Museum with paints of Leonardo da Vinci. When you are tired of sightseeing you can go to the Cellar under the Rams (Piwnica pod Baranami) to feel Cracow’s atmosphere.
I really recommend this city, because there are a lot of things, that we can do, visit or see. If we organize our trip to Cracow well, it will be very memorable experience.

Miałam w nim uwzględnić podstawowe informacje o Krakowie i co można tam zwiedzić, zobaczyć, zrobić.
Z góry dziękuję ;)
Cracow (daj tutaj...the 2nd largest...) is situated by RIVER Vistula 'second largest city in Poland.' (w zlym miejscu). It was also 'second Poland’s capital' (NIE, poszukaj jak to bylo,- troche historii). Its rich history and culture should be known 'for' (zle slowo) all 'Polish' (zle dokoncz to zdanie, bo brakuje rezeczownika na koncu). Also foreigners appreciate (przedimek) beauty of Cracow EVIDENCE?). In 2006 it was one of (przedimek) five most popular cities of Europe.
Cracow is home 'of' TO many historical buildings and monuments such as The Wawel Royal Castle, Wawel Cathedral, the Old Town, Main Market Square and Sukiennice Cloth Hall. There are 11 big theatres and several small (ale czego daj rzeczownik), often situated in 'moody' (poszukaj inne slowo) cellars in Cracow. You can do many other things in this historical city, for example visit (brak przedimka) Museum of Japanese’s Art and Culture 'Manggha' (daj to na poczatku) or (przedimek) Czartoryski Museum with 'paints' (farby? nie, poszukaj jak pisze sie obrazy) of Leonardo da Vinci. When you are tired of sightseeing you can go to the Cellar under the Rams (Piwnica pod Baranami) to feel Cracow’s atmosphere (ale w jaki sposob? co tam sie dzieje?) .
If we organize our trip to Cracow well, it will be (przedimek) very memorable experience.

Masz problemy z przedimkami,
Dziękuję za odpowiedź :) Wiem, że mam duże problemy z przyimkami... Najczęściej zupełnie o nich zapominam. Poprawiłam ten tekst stosując się do wskazówek, mam nadzieję, że jest lepiej. Mogę prosić o ponowne sprawdzenie?
Przy okazji, nie rozumiem upomnienia nt. Krakowa jako drugiej stolicy Polski. Którą był? Sprawdzałam i nadal wydaje mi się, że był drugą. Ew. mogę zmienić w tekście, że Kraków to dawna stolica Polski, wtedy nie będzie problemów.

Cracow the second largest city in Poland is situated by River Vistula. It was also second Poland’s capital. Its rich history and culture should be known to all Poles. In 2006 it was one of five most popular cities of Europe. It means, that also foreigners appreciate the beauty of Cracow.
Cracow is home to many historical buildings and monuments such as The Wawel Royal Castle, Wawel Cathedral, the Old Town, Main Market Square and Sukiennice Cloth Hall. There are 11 big and several small, often situated in cosy cellars, theatres in Cracow. You can do many other things in this historical city, for example visit the Manggha Museum of Japanese’s Art and Culture or the Czartoryski Museum with paintings of Leonardo da Vinci. When you are tired of sightseeing you can go to the Cellar under the Rams (Piwnica pod Baranami). Place which has affected on evolution of Cracow’s culture for years for sure allow you to feel Cracow’s atmosphere. I really recommend this city, because there are a lot of things, that we can do, visit or see. If we organize our trip to Cracow well, it will be a very memorable experience.

:)
A kiedy Krakow byl stolica Polski? Przed czy po Warszawie?

Cracow the second largest city in Poland is situated by THE River Vistula. It was ONCE THE FIRST CAPITAL 'also second Poland’s capital' (niepotr) CITY OF POLAND.
'It' THIS means, that also foreigners appreciate the beauty of Cracow.
When you are tired of sightseeing you can go to the Cellar under the Rams (Piwnica pod Baranami), a place which has affected THE 'on' (niepotr) evolution of Cracow’s culture for years 'for sure' AND WHICH WILL allow you to feel Cracow’s atmosphere.

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No oczywiście, że przed, przecież Warszawa jest teraz. Ale po Gnieźnie.
Tekst poprawiony, dziękuję za pomoc :)
sorry, nie wiedzialam o Gnieznie....teraz to tak, Krakow was once a capital city after Gniezno.
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