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Write an email to friend describing someone you have got to know recently. Include the following information:
how you met
a description of the positive and negative ascpects of your new friend's personality
what you have in common in terms of personality and interests


My dear Ann,

Yesterday only I returned from France where I had gone for an excursion with my parents. I was ever so excited about the experience that I have just decided to pen it all to you.

At the beginning of our trip everything indicated that during the stay there I can't count on anything more interesting than sightseeing the town and monuments. Everything has changed when I decided to visit the Louvre where I met very special person.

He was completely different person from any other and straight away jump me out because of his outrageous clothes. He was wearing a strange long colourful coat and stylish cap. During the tour I was observing him. To my surprise he suddenly approached me. First of all I was afraid because I thought that he's angry that I watched him but he only asked me : „What's the time?”.

I answered him and so we started talking. It turned out that he's the Louvre worden. Despite the fact that he was a little bit eccentric he was also well-balanced and open-minded person with a lot of ideas. When he was talking I felt that he's very self-confident and ambitious. What's more he seems to be a little bit funny and unfortunatelly vain but as we know arts people have this feature very often.

To my amazement we had a lot of in common. For example I'm also open-minded and ambitious person which is trying to realize a lot of project and ideas. As You know they are very often connected with arts and particulary with fotography which seems to be very similar to his job.

I'm sure that I will never forget this trip and person which made me realize that anyone can be judged by appearances. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

With love
Your friend

Z góry dziękuję za sprawdzenie i zwrócenie uwagi na pomyłki gdyż na razie jestem raczej na bardzo podstawowym poziomie i często zdarza mi się robić kardynalne błędy :(

'Yesterday only' (zla kol slow) I returned from France where I had gone for an 'excursion' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo) with my parents. I was ever so excited about the experience that I have just decided to 'pen it all' (ok, ale zauwaz, ze to jest b. stara forma, lepiej ...to write a letter/email/note) to you.

At the beginning of our trip everything indicated that during the stay there I 'can't' COULD'T count on anything more interesting than sightseeing the town and monuments. Everything 'has' HAD changed when I decided to visit the Louvre where I met (przedimek) very special person.

He was (przedimek) completely different person from any other and straight away 'jump me out' (nie, to jest zle, zla kol slow...jumped out to me) because of his outrageous clothes. He was wearing a strange long colourful coat and (przedimek) stylish cap. During the tour I 'was observing' (zly czas, tutaj simple 'observed') him.
First of all I was afraid because I thought that he's angry (at the fact) that I HAD watched him but he only asked me : „What's the time?”.

It turned out that 'he's' HE WAS the Louvre 'worden' (ortog). Despite the fact that he was a little bit eccentric he was also (przedimek) well-balanced and open-minded person with a lot of ideas. When he was talking I felt that 'he's' HE WAS very self-confident and ambitious. What's more he 'seems' SEEMED to be a little bit funny and 'unfortunatelly' (ortog) vain but as we know 'arts' ARTY people have this feature very often.

For example I'm also (przedimek) open-minded and ambitious person 'which' WHO (jak o ludziach to WHO) is trying to realize a lot of projectS and ideas. As 'You' (mala litera w srodku zdania) know they are very often connected with arts and 'particulary' (ortog) with 'fotography' (ortog) which seems to be very similar to his job.

I'm sure that I will never forget this trip and (przedimek) person 'which' WHO made me realize that 'anyone can' (nie, to znaczy calkowicie cos innego, tutaj...no one should) be judged by appearances ONLY.

Masz problemy z przedimkami (a, an, the) Troche popracuj nad nimi.

Faktycznie , dobrze zauważyłeś/łaś mam spore problemy z przedimkami , zaraz do nich usiądę i mam nadzieję, że wreszcie nauczę się je poprawnie stosować , dziękuję bardzo za poprawienie błędów. Pozdrawiam