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Holiday is exactly the time for which people can wait a whole long year. They will do everything to finally get away from reality, even for a while. Such factors as stressful work, boring school or demanding children together favor to escape to more peaceful place. Lastly, the glorious day comes and created a few questions “Where is the place of my leisure?” and “I should stay in my home country or go abroad?”.
We can find both some advantages and disadvantages for each option. Many people are convicted that Poland is a country where only the cold sea and mountains came into play, where we can spend our vacation. After all, we have beautiful lakes, castles, rocks, national Parks, rivers with which we can connect our holiday. The question is how because at first glance, these options may seem boring. One of examples might be the canoeing through Krutynia river. This river is located in Mazury, therefore it is combined with a tour of the river, lakes and nature reserve at once. Of course, it is just one of many options for those who love nature and peace. For those who desire to have fun during their free time travel agencies suggest many offers, where parties and discos are in first place. Everyone will find something for yourself, moreover it is our duty to promote our state not only to the close neighbors but also to those from abroad. However, we can find Poland as a expensive country do not be discouraged so quickly, because there are cheaper options from hotels, for example, camping sites.
Now, as we have presented the option for vacation in Poland lets move to the abroad holidays. Almost everyone prefer spending there their holidays due to the favorable weather conditions. In addition, we can explore unique places that may stay in our minds for a long time and everyone will be jealous of such trip. Furthermore, prices for holidays abroad do not differ so much from those in Poland. Obviously, it is linked to the conditions which we are going to choose. So, what stand in our way to go abroad? For sure this can be language. Although, there are many guidebooks that contain useful phrases which will help us to carry out basic conversations.
In conclusion, the choice of our holidays depends on one’s expectations. If you have already visited Poland and you are sure that nothing can surprise you here, why not go abroad to see something new. The sky’s the limit.

Such factors as stressful work, boring school or demanding children together 'favor to escape' (cos tu nie tak) to more peaceful place. Lastly, the glorious day comes and (ale kto? co? ) created a few questions “Where is the place of my leisure?” and “I should stay in my home country or go abroad?”.
We can find both some advantages and disadvantages for each option. Many people are 'convicted' (napewno nie wlasciwe slowo, 'convicted' znaczy ze znajduje sie we wiezieniu) that Poland is a country where only the cold sea and mountains came into play(,) (niepotr zmienia cala tresc zdania) where we can spend our vacation. After all, we have beautiful lakes, castles, rocks, national 'Parks' (dlaczego 'park duza litera, jak 'national ' napisalas mala?), rivers with which we can connect our holiday.
One 'of examples' (popraw) might be 'the' (niepotr) canoeing through (brak cos) Krutynia river. This river is located in Mazury, therefore it is combined with a tour of the river, lakes and nature reserve ALL at once.
For those who desire to have fun during their free time travel agencies suggest many offers, where parties and discos are 'in first place' (napisz to inaczej...on top of their agenda) . Everyone will find something for 'yourself' (nie, tutaj themselves), moreover it is our duty to promote our state not only to 'the' (niepotr) close neighbors but also to those from abroad. However, 'we can find' (tutaj masz zle, ma byc..if 'we' ale lepiej 'you') find) Poland as 'a' (popraw) expensive country do not be discouraged so quickly, because there are cheaper options from hotels, for example, camping sites.
Now, as we have presented the option for vacation in Poland lets move to 'the abroad' (foreign) holidays. Almost everyone preferS spending there their holidays due to the favorable weather conditions. In addition, we can explore unique places that may stay in our minds for a long time and everyone will be jealous of such 'trip' (popraw cos, albo to w l. poj z przedimkiem, albo l. mn).
Obviously, 'it' (do czego 'it' sie odonsi, wczesniej bylo 'prices') 'is' (?) linked to the conditions which we are going to choose. So, what 'stand' (3os.l.poj) in our way 'to go' FOR GOING abroad? For sure this can be (a gdzie przedimek?) language. 'Although' (to slowo wg mnie nie pasuje, bo brakuje reszte zdania), there are many guidebooks that contain useful phrases which will help us to carry out basic conversations.