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It is believed that the internet has greater and greater impact on our lives , It delivers us infinite opportunities of meeting new people from any place across the globe.
To begin with , there are countless social websites , one that is known the most is certainly the facebook. Anyone can create his own profile on the facebook , therefore it is a great place to meet new people. While looking on a someone’s profile , you can tell much about a such person. For instance you can learn about his music and movie taste. You would rather talk to someone , whose interests are similar to yours , would not you ?
On the other hand , it is impossible for us to get any insight into the person on the other side. Someone may not be person , who he is telling he is. For instance photos uploaded by someone may be fake or retouched. They may present any other person , which could lead us to misjudge.
I could not forget to mention ease that comes along with internet social portals. You basically can talk to anyone whenever you want. Velocity of transferring messages is instant! Thus far I have not waited longer than few seconds for my message to be sent to the other person , which is brilliant!
To sum up , the Internet is surely a good place to meet new people . I believe it is the easiest and the safest way to meet new people. However ,it should be done with consideration.
edytowany przez elefantus: 27 lut 2012