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Jest to e-mail na poziomie drugiej klasy gimnazjum, mam problemy z czasami więc prosiłabym o pomoc :)

Hi Jessie!
Happy New Year to you too! I’m fine. I had a great time yesterday. It was the best night of my life!
I met with my friend Paulina in her place at 6 p.m so we had much time for ourselves. We had a champagne – of course without alcohol – and some snacks. At 8 p.m we turned on TV and watched „New Year with TVN”. We listened music and spended a nice time. At 11 p.m we went to the city becasue at midnight people went off firework there. We came back to Paulina’s house when fireworks ended. We went sleep at 3 a.m. I really liked my New year!
Okay, so I can write something about my New Year’s resolutions too. I’m going to lose some weight, not much bacause I’m not so fat. I’m going to start eat healthier, no more chips and chocolate. My mum says that too, but I don’t belive her. She says so every year and she loves chocolate too much to be able to do it, but I hope she keep it up now. This year i don’t have anymore resolution, maybe next.
We’ve got a holiday this week, so I’m going to spend some time on swimming pool and watch some movies. My parents want to go to the mountains, but I can’t ski, so I don’t want to go.
Write soon, bye!
Wiktoria

had plenty of time
listened BRAK SLOWA music
spend jest nieregularny, wstaw wlasciwa forme
people were shooting fireworks
the fireworks ended
went BRAK SLOWA sleep
okay, so - to nie jest normalny poczatek zdania. Po polsku nie napiszesz 'ok, no to napisze..."
ponieważ - ortogr.
more healthily
wierzyc - tez blad ortogr.
w zdaniu z hope zla forma czasownika po she
any more resolutions
maybe next = moze następne
swimming pool - zly wyraz przed i brak przedimka przed

nie widze bledow w doborze czasow.

Wprowadziłam jeszcze kilka poprawek, jest dobrze?

Hi Jessie!
Happy New Year to you too! I’m fine. I had a great time yesterday. It was the best night of my life!
I met with my friend Paulina at her place at 6 p.m, so we had plenty of time for ourselves. We had a champagne – of course without alcohol – and some snacks. At 8 p.m we turned on TV and watched „New Year’s Eve with TVN”. We listened to music and spent a nice time. At 11 p.m we went to the city centre to watch fireworks display. We came back to Paulina’s after the show. We went to sleep at 3 a.m. I really liked my New Year’s Eve!
I made my resolutions, too. I’m going to lose some weight, but not much bacause I’m not plump. I’m going to start eat healthier food and give up chocolate and chips. My mum says that too, but I don’t believe her. She says so every year, but she loves chocolate too much to be able to do it. However, I hope she will succeed this year. I don’t have any more resolution for this year, but maybe next year I’ll make more of them .
We’ve got a holiday this week, so I’m going to spend some time at the swimming pool and I’m going to watch some movies. My parents want to go to the mountains. I can’t ski, so I don’t want to go.
Write soon, bye!
Wiktoria

zjadlo odpowiedz
met my friend
had a very good time (had jest jednak lepsze niz spent)
a/the fireworks display
'poniewaz' nadal blad ortograficzny
any more resolution = żadnych obietnicy