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Hi xyz,
Thank you for all beautiful pictures from sunny Lloret de mar. Your new tan perfectly fits to your chocolate hair. You look beautiful in your new swimsuit. You won’t believe where I am now: in Haiti! I read an article about the departure of volunteers to help people rebuild their houses. I thought : why not? I wanted to help these people who lost everything. Every day for 4 hours I work on construction, for 2 hours I teach children at a nearby school and for about an hour I prepare packs to give it away next day. It's not a vacation for me, it is hard work. But I must say it is worth it, because every day I see the smiling faces of children and adults who we were helping. They are very grateful and they show it. The biggest surprise for me was that these people are still happy and joyful with all tragedies. What do you think about taking this job?
I love you and miss a lot
I can’t wait to see you.
XYZ

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Your new tan perfectly fits /inne "pasuje" i wtedy cos ominiesz/ to your chocolate hair.
I read /mozesz uzyc inny czas/ an article about the /ja bym dal A/ departure of volunteers to help people rebuild their houses.
I thought: why not JOIN THEM? I ALWAYS wanted to help these people who lost /inny czas/ everything.
Every day for 4 hours I work on construction, for 2 hours I teach children at a nearby school and for about an hour I prepare packs to give it away next day.
But I must say it is worth it, because every day I see the smiling faces of children and adults who we were helping.
The biggest surprise for me was, that these people are still happy and joyful with /pomimo/ all /ICH/ tragedies. What do you think about me taking this job?
I love you and miss you a lot.
edytowany przez fui_eu: 10 mar 2012
a co to jest 'chocolate hair' - czy to hair made out of chocolate?
jak juz - to chocolate-coloured hair

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