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1. Praca z dziećmi:

I've always liked, I like and I loved to work with children, because I think they are the future of the world.
They increase my experience. through them I became calm, patient. Because since 2008 I am an active volunteer in sailing society. I have good contact with kids. Ours sailing society organizes a lot of charity events, for example in children's day we organize for kids games and we swim on lake boats.
I also have younger brother and I took care of him

2. Praca 1

My work as a volunteer is that I help to prepare boats for the sailing season. I clean the dirt from, and then paints the underside of the boat with a special paint. I renew items from the timber. I prepare the area around the club. I cut the grass, hedge and I repair a fence.

3. Praca 2

My duties included analytical and design work, contact with costumers. I sold sewage pipes with diffrent diameter. I sold also mechanicals, twigs and others steel (mill) products. My boss was very satisfied of my work.

4. umiejętności:

I love to cook, from a small child I cooked, because this interested me. I can spice, then cook chicken, fry the meat, prepare salad with (example) rise, macaroni, potatoes, cucumbers.I can handle the difficult food. My parents really praise me for it. Also on scout camps, I was very handy in the kitchen. I was on one of the camps, I was a chef. Besides, I am a nice, polite, and I can talk to people. I can work in a team. I am responsible

At home and at work often deals with hygiene failures. I can to repair PVC pipe. I can think for themselves. I can unclog a clogged sink. fix a smelly shower, I can to install an undersink water filter, I like to do and I have no problems with that, I think it might be useful at camp, besides, I have no problems in working with others, I learned everything in the daily work at home. I'm strong and I can even wear a water tank. I can also clean the bathroom

Plumbing
First of all, I have a medium sized garden before the house, at least once a week I need to cultivate.I tear out the weeds, cut the grass mower, care of trees - I sprayed them for fear of pests. I gather the fruits that fall from trees, In the autumn I always rake leaves. For 5 years also had a pond, Fish, frogs and even turtles swam in my pond, I fed the fish.I care about the quality and appearance of the water, I did not allow for any diseases.


Carpentry.
I think I'm a talented craftsman, I can finish the wood, match the wood on the cabinets, Ideal feels the detailed work, I can maintenance the wood, in the garden, along with my dad built a wooden fence,When I built the pen for dog, I was very happy. I think carpentry is hard work, but it gives a lot of fun. I also work a lot with wood ( yacht club), for example, during the renovation of the bridge.
also In the garage I have a router for wood and often I use it.

5. Dlaczego chcesz pracować na campie

First of all I want to meet poeple from diffrent culture, because I believe that working with the Hungarians,Germans, Americans and Mexicans, will that my experience in human relations will increase.
Secondly, I think it is a great language school, outside physical work and America has always interested me.
and
I think I will be great employee for you because I am not afraid of any kind work and changes. I can work hard for many hours. I think my skills will be useful in your camp.

6. twoje pozytywne strony:

I think my positive thinking, intelligence, experience, but also the proper motivation will positively influence the work at camp. With the current high motivation and experience, I can easily do the hard work. Besides, I am always full of energy and I have several hobbies: football, basketball, boating. My friends always say me that it is easy to get along with me and I not create problems. In conclusion I am open, honest and positive person. You, as the employer, You will be pleased with the atmosphere that is around me

1.
I've always liked, I like and I WOULD LIKE 'loved' (niepotr) to work with children, because I think THAT (I think THAT) they are the future of the world.
They increase my experience (ale do czego?) . through them I became calm AND patient. 'Because' (nie zaczynaj zdan z 'because') Since 2008 I am an active volunteer in (a gdzie przedimek?) sailing society.
'Ours' OUR-nasze) sailing society organizes a lot of charity events, for example 'in' ON Children's day we organize 'for kids games' (zla kolej slow) and we swim 'on lake boats' (nie tutaj 'swim' jest kalka z polskiego- nie 'plywamy').
I also have (przedimek) younger brother and I 'took' (teraz czy wczesniej?) care of him

2.
I clean the dirt from, and then 'paints' (zly czasownik, I paint, you paint, he paints) the underside of the boat with a special paint. 'I renew items from the timber' (tego nie rozumiem). I prepare the area around the club. I cut the grass, hedge and I repair 'a' THE (bo wiesz dokladnie o ktora chodzi) fence.

3.
My duties included analytical and design work, contact with costumers. I sold sewage pipes with 'diffrent' (blad ortog) 'diameter' (tutaj l. mnoga). I 'sold also' (zla kol slow) 'mechanicals' (nie za bardzo lubie to slowo tutaj), twigs and 'others' (zle slowo, tutaj OTHER) steel (mill) products. My boss was very satisfied 'of' (kalka z polskiego, nie rob tego, w jez. ang jest inaczej, i musisz sie przyzwyczaic do tego, tutaj WITH) my work.

4.
I love to cook, from (tutaj cos brakuje) a small child I cooked, because this interested me. I can spice, then cook (brak przedimka) chicken, fry the meat, prepare salad with (example) 'rise' (zle slowo, popatrz dokladnie w slowniku), macaroni, potatoes AND cucumbers.
'I was on one' (nie, tutaj sie pogubiles, napisz ON ONE) of the camps, I was a chef. Besides THIS, I am a nice, polite (ale co? tutaj cos brakuje), and I can talk to people.

At home and at work (kto? co?) often deals with hygiene failures. I can 'to' (niepotr) repair (brak przedimka) PVC pipe. 'I can think for themselves' (cos tu nie tak, tyo co napisales, to Ja moge myslec za nich?).
I can 'to' (niepotr) install an undersink water filter, I like to do (ale co? musisz napisac) and I have no problems with that, I think 'it' (nie, tutaj napisz 'this skill') might be useful at camp. Besides, I have no problems in working with others, I learned everything 'in the daily work' (cos tu nie tak) at home. I'm strong and I can even 'wear a water tank' (cos tu nie tak).

First of all, I have a medium sized garden 'before' IN FRIONT OF the house AND at least once a week I need to cultivate.I tear out the weeds, 'cut the grass mower' (pomysl co to pisze), TAKE care of (przedimek) trees - I sprayed them 'for fear of pests' (nbie, cos tu nie tak). I gather the fruits that fall from (przedimek) trees, In the autumn I always rake (przedimek) leaves. For THE LAST 5 years I also had a pond.
I care about the quality and appearance of the water, I did not allow 'for' (niepotr) any diseases TO DEVELOP.


I think I'm a talented craftsman, I can finish the wood, match the wood on the cabinets,'Ideal feels the detailed work' (tutaj sie xzgubilam) . I can 'maintenance' (zla czesc mowy tutaj czasownik) the wood, in the garden, along with my dad (kto? co? musisz napisac) built a wooden fence,When I built the pen for (przedimek) dog, I was very happy. I think carpentry is hard work, but it gives a lot of 'fun' SATISFACTION.
'also In' (popraw) the garage I have a router for wood and often I use it.

5.
First of all I want to meet poeple from 'diffrent' (ortog) 'culture' (tutaj l. mn), because I believe that working with 'the' (niepotr) Hungarians,Germans, Americans and Mexicans, will (tutaj brakuje slowa) that my experience in human relations will increase.
Secondly, I think THAT (I think THAT) it is a great language school AND outside physical work and America has always interested me.
and
I think I will be great employee for you because I am not afraid of any kind OF work and changes.

6.
I think my positive thinking, intelligence, experience, but also the 'proper' (poszukaj innego slowa) motivation will positively influence the work at (przedimek) camp. With the current high motivation and experience, I can easily do the (tu cos brakuje, napisz 'required') hard work.
My friends always 'say me' TELL ME that it is easy to get along with me 'and' AS I not create problems. In conclusion I am (brak przedimka) open, honest and positive person. You, as the employer, 'You' (w srodku zdania piszemy mala litera, ale i tak nie jest potr) will be pleased with the atmosphere that is around me