A letter asking for information

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Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing to request further information about your skiing course. I really interested in participating and I need something more information about it.

Firstly I would appreciate some information where the course will be placed. What is the name of the slope. What about accomodation? Are there only multipersonal rooms or is it a ability to have a single room? Would it be possible for you to send me any photos of the hotel and surroundings?

I am wondering about the average age of the participants.I am twenty years old and would wish to be with people in the same age.

I would be grateful if you could tell me something about food. Is it included in price? Is there any restaurant or shop not far away?

Another matter I need information on is equipment. I should be grateful if you would send me your brochure and price list about your hiring establishment.

I would appreciate it if you could inform me as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ

Dear Sir or 'Madame' (slowo jest MADAM),

I (brak cos) really interested in participating and I need 'something' (zle slowo) more information about it.

Firstly I would appreciate 'some information' (napisz cos innego, bo caly czas tylko 'information' i 'infoirmation', mozna 'some details') 'where' (tutaj pasuje slowo 'location') the course will be 'placed' (to jest calkociw zle slowo - tutaj 'held').
What is the name of the slope( a gdzie jest znak zapytania?).
'What about accomodation?' (jakos tego zdania nie lubie - wprowadz to lepiej) Are there only 'multipersonal' (dziwne slowo - napisz 'multi-occupancy') rooms or is 'it' (no z czym dokladnie to sie laczy?) a 'ability' (zle slowo) to have a single room?

I am twenty years old and would wish to be with people 'in' OF the same age.

I would be grateful if you could tell me something about food. Is it included in (przedimek) price? Is there 'any' A restaurant or A shop 'not far away' (lepiej 'nearby')?

Another matter I need information on is (przedimek) equipment. I should be grateful if you would send me your brochure and price list about your hiring 'establishment' (nie za bardzo , daj tutaj 'facility').

I would appreciate it if you could 'inform me' (napisz 'respond') as soon as possible.