Solving mysteries and riddles is characteristic of human nature.

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Solving mysteries and riddles is characteristic of human nature. Why do you think people find it attractive? Give examples to justify your opinion.

All people like mysteries and secrets. They love to solve riddles and play games which demand logical thinking. Personally, I believe that the reason why people find it attractive is that they drawing benefits from jigsaw puzzles. I want to give some examples which justify my opinion.
Riddles which we can find in the Internet or even in the special books are often extremely difficult and complicated. Solving them require very intensive logical thinking. It takes much time to find the solutions. While we are solving riddles we develop our imagination and also met new people or make friends with somebody who we already know.
People are very curious and it results from their nature. When we hear about some problem or somebody’s secret and we don’t know everything about it, we can’t stop thinking about it as long as we will be know all in this topic.
Playing popular mysterious games like Scrabble or Puns require cleverness. This games develop our vocabulary, imagination and lets us nicely spend our time. It doesn’t matter how old we are- we always are enjoying during solving some puzzles. It makes us happier and causes that we are relaxed and we can feel like Sherlock Holmes for the while.

Personally, I believe that the reason why people find it attractive is that they 'drawing' (nie to slowo) benefits from jigsaw puzzles.

Riddles which we can find in the Internet or even in 'the' (wg mnie niepotr) special books are often extremely difficult and complicated. Solving them 'require' (tutaj zle, ma byc 'requires') very intensive logical thinking. It takes 'much'(poszukaj lepsze slowo, wiecej okreslajace) time to find the solutions. While we are solving riddles we develop our imagination and also 'met' (ortog) new people or make friends with somebody whoM we already know.
When we hear about some problem or somebody’s secret and we don’t know everything about it, we can’t stop thinking about it FOR as long as we 'will be' (niepotr) know all '(tutaj mozesz dodac 'there is to know') in this topic.
Playing popular mysterious games like Scrabble or Puns requireS cleverness. This games develop our vocabulary, imagination and 'lets' LET us 'nicely spend our time' (zl jkol slow, najpierw 'co' a pozniej 'jak'). It doesn’t matter how old we are- we always 'are enjoying' (zly czas) 'during' (nie rozumiem tego) solving some puzzles. It makes us happier and 'causes' (zle slowo, tutaj RESULTS - bo to jest 'result' tego, a nie 'cause'-powod) that we are relaxed and we can feel like Sherlock Holmes for 'the' A while.

they [...] drawing benefits - ale użyłabym Present Simple, chyba że to był rzeczownik to wtedy nie rozumiem
"Solving them require very intensive logical thinking" - 3os
"and also met new people" nie zmieniałabym czasu na przeszły
"some problem" l.mn
"we can’t stop thinking about it as long as [till] we will be know all [everything] in [about] this topic"
"Playing popular mysterious games like Scrabble or Puns require cleverness" 3os
"This games develop" zdecyduj czy l.poj. czy l.mn i zmień o trzeba
"we always are enjoying during solving some puzzles" nie podoba mi się,

It doesn’t matter how old we are- we always 'are enjoying' (zly czas) 'during' (nie rozumiem tego) solving some puzzles. Chodziło mi o to, że cieszymy się podczas rozwiązywania zagadek...

Dziękuję baaardzo za Waszą pomoc :)

It doesn’t matter how old we are- we always 'are enjoying' (zly czas) 'during' (nie rozumiem tego) solving some puzzles

Ja wiem o co Ci chodzilo, ale zdanie dalej masz niegram. Popraw to.

ale ja nie mam pojęcia jak je poprawić (poza czasem gramatycznym) :(

we always enjoy 'during' solving some puzzles - bo napisałeś "zawsze lubimy 'podczas' rowiązywania zagadek"

enjoy [what]