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Verry well I recall the second class of junior high school. I had the best grades of the end of year in whole class.
All year I systematically worked to have the best degrees. I learnt fairly lesson on lesson. My hard work was was remunerated - I had a red belt on the certificate and I would to get some award. All the time I thought about the secret award. Finally came the end off school year. The gym had gathered all the students dressed in white and blac colors. When I was called, I went to the center of the gym and I didn't believed my eyes. I stood with open mounths and I looked at my new multi - purpose juicer. At first I thought it was a joke but judging by the facial expression headmistress, it wasn't a joke in the slightest. She was standing in front of me filled with pride and satisfaction and I still couldn'd utter a word of astonishment. I took my award for its new home. Going out of school I heard only 'Let it serve you well'. It was quite strange but why I was complanning? Juicer became the best friend of my family.
Sometimes I think that well that I learnt so much. How could I live without it before?

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tlumaczysz slowo w slowo z polskiego a to tak nie wyjdzie

'Verry' (blad ortog) well I recall the second 'class' YEAR of junior high school. I had the best grades 'of' (zle slowo) the end of (cos brak) year in (cos brak) whole class.
All year I systematically worked to have the best 'degrees' (calkowicie zle slowo). I 'learnt fairly' (NAwet tego nie rozumiem) 'lesson on lesson' (cos tu nie tak). My hard work 'was was' (popraw) remunerated - 'I had a red belt on the certificate' (tego to nikt nie zrozumie poza Polska-trzeba poszukac inne odpowiedniki) and I would 'to' (po co to 'to' tutaj jest?) get some award.
Finally came the end 'off' (zle slowo) (cos brak) school year. 'The gym had gathered all the students dressed in white and blac colors' (napisz to inaczej...All the students...). When I was called, I went to the center of the gym and I 'didn't' (zle slowo) 'believed' (zly czas) my eyes. I stood with (cos brak) open 'mounths' (tutaj blad ortog i musi byc l. poj) and I looked at my new multi - purpose juicer. At first I thought it was a joke (przecinek przed 'but') but judging by the facial expression (tu brak 2 slowa) headmistress, it wasn't a joke in the slightest.
I still 'couldn'd' (popraw) utter a word of astonishment. I took my award 'for' (zle slowo) its new home.
It was quite strange (przecinek przed 'but') but why 'I was' (zla kol slow - to jest pytanie) 'complanning' (blad ortog)? (cos brak) juicer became the best friend of my family.
Sometimes I think that 'well' (to jest zle slowo) that I learnt so much.