Witam, prosiłbym o zerknięcie na te dwa listy, pierwszy z nich formalny drugi nieformalny. Z góry wielkie dzięki ;)
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your letter which I received last week. I would like to say that your problem is really unwonted. I had to check it out with a specialist.
My suggestion would be to take a chance to take a well-paid job. It is really important to connect your hobby which is composing music with making money, because if you would like to succeed, you have to earn good money. I think that it would be profitably for you to buckle down to work for a few months. If you were to follow my advice, you certainly meet new people who can help you to find ‘the right people’. I believe that during your job you could cultivate your interests. I am sure that if you still practice composing, you will assuredly get on with it(radzić sobie, robić postęp w czymś?)
It would not be relatively simple time in your life. You would take a pot luck. If you get through this, you will succeed.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
DRUGI:
Dear John,
Thanks a lot for the information you've sent me in your last letter. I’m sure that your problem is pretty common, especially in people of your age.
I think that your parents have still their old-fashioned habits. They haven’t found out about today’s needs of youth enough. Yours parents want to bring you up in the same way they were bringing up.
I found some solutions for your problem. What I’d suggest is that you should try to talk to your parents about the way they are treating you. You should say that nowadays everything has changed revolutionary to compare with theirs prime and also that during this 3 years of studying and living out of home, you’ve learnt enough to lead your own live. If that wouldn’t help, you could make an appointment with family psychologist. You’ll talk in front of your parents and together find a solution. The final tip would be to leave your home, find a job and rent a flat.
I believe that my suggestions would be useful and helpful to get you rid of your parents. Let me know, if you succeed or not.
Best wishes and good luck for the future.