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I was on the birthday party two weeks ago. I must admit that it was the most unusual party I have ever been. Both place and food was very amazing.
Even though I don't like seafood, most of dishes was delicious. On the table were plates full of prawns and snails. Everyone could chose what want to eat. My favourite food was octopus with mussels. At first I was afraid of to eat it but I was curious how it taste.
The place where was the birthday party was also extraordinary. The party was on the roof of the tower block. The view from this place was fabulous. I could see a city at night from a height. Thankfully I don't have fear of heights and I felt great. The atmosphere was freindly. The music was catchy. I had a whale of a time. Everyone was laughing. Most of guests were dancing as well. Despite they wearing a casual clothes, they looked formal. I saw many of my friends. Besides, I met some new people.

The birthday party was certainly great. Both place and food was original and unique. I'm glad that I could be there. I have an unforgettable memories.


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I was 'on' (to jest kalka z polskiego 'na' w ang. mowimy inaczej...I was AT a ...) the birthday party two weeks ago. I must admit that it was the most unusual party I have ever been TO. Bot(cos brak) place and (cos brak) food 'was' (ale wymieniasz 2 rzeczy-musi byc l. mn) very amazing.
Even though I don't like seafood, most of dishes 'was' (dishes to l. mn-popraw) delicious.
Everyone could chose what THEY wantED to eat.
At first I was afraid 'of' (niepotr) to eat it but I was curious AS TO how it tasteD.
The place where 'was' (w zlym miejscu) the birthday party OCCURRED was also extraordinary. The party was on the roof of 'the' (daj tutaj 'a') tower block.
I could see 'a' (daj tutaj THE) city at night from a height.
The atmosphere was 'freindly' (ortog).
Despite 'they' (zle slowo ale i tak niepotr) wearing 'a' (niepotr-bo to ma sie zgadzac z l. mn-clothes) casual clothes, they looked formal.
Besides THAT I met some new people.

Both place and food 'was' (l. mn) original and unique.
I have 'an' (niepotr) unforgettable memories.

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