Essay - Opisz zalety i wady studiowania

These days, many people go on studies. Even though it is harder to get on college, there are more students than before. College graduation is often neccessary to get a well paid job. There are a lot of advantages and disadvantage of going for studies.
The most important advantage of studying is possibility to learn a required possibilites in our future job. Most of universities offers a high level of education. Moreover, studying is a good time to learn independance. Students usually rent a studio or small flat. They need to care about yourself. They can't rely on helping their parents.
Besides that, studying is a good occasion to meet some new people and their culture. It often happens that colleges enable exchanges for foreign countires. It is the best opportunity to improve language skills.
Nevertheless studying very often don't give experience. Lectures are rather too theoretical. Many companies engage only workers with experience. Therefore many students have to do a courses. Courses are unfortunately payable. They spend a lot of time to complete it as well.
To sum up, I must admit that there are more advantages than disadvantage of studying. Everyone who want to get a good job should have a higher education. It is a key to a better future.



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Pozdrawiam!

These days, many people 'go on studies' (cos mi tu sie nie wydaje tak- za bardzo po polsku). Even though it is harder 'to get on college' (co to takiego? popraw), there are more students than before.
There are a lot of advantages and disadvantage of 'going for studies' (?).
The most important advantage of studying is (cos tu brak) possibility 'to learn' (zle - popraw) 'a' (popraw) required 'possibilites' (zle slowo) 'in' (zle slowo) our future job. Most of universities 'offers' (popraw) a high level of education.
Students usually rent a studio or (cos brak) small flat. They need to care about 'yourself' (ciebie?.) They can't rely on 'helping their parents' (Fakt - oni/studenci nie moga polegac na pomaganiu rodzicom...to chyba jasne).
Nevertheless studying very often 'don't' (po jakiemu to? napisz to poprawnie) give experience.
Therefore many students have to do 'a' (no i po co to 'a' tutaj jest, po co?) courses. 'Courses are unfortunately payable' (napiz to inaczej, bo mozna przeczytac za kursy placa uczestnikom). They spend a lot of time to complete 'it' (it? przeciez to ma sie zgadza z 'courses') as well.
Everyone who 'want' (popraw) to get a good job should have 'a' (niepotr) higher education.

Bardzo dziękuję. Muszę się brać do roboty...

These days, many people 'go on studies' - go to college.
Even though it is harder 'to get on college' there are more students than before. - get into college
There are a lot of advantages and disadvantage of 'going for studies' - of studying
The most important advantage of studying is (cos tu brak) possibility 'to learn' (zle - popraw) 'a' (popraw) required 'possibilites' (zle slowo) 'in' (zle slowo) our future job.
- The most important advantage of studying is the possibility learning the required skills which will be help at work
Most of universities 'offers' a high level of education. - offer
Students usually rent a studio or (cos brak) small flat. - a small flat
They need to care about 'yourself' - themselves
They can't rely on 'helping their parents' - They can't rely on their parents.
Nevertheless studying very often 'don't' give experience. - Nevertheless studying does not give experience.
'Courses are unfortunately payable' - Unfortunately, courses are payable. (? nie wiem...)
Everyone who 'want' to get a good job should have higher education. - Everyone who would want to get a good job...

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