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Trip to the Warsaw is taking place 16th January. The trip starts at 7 a.m. Gathering is in front of school. We are going to go to the museum and the theatre. Everyone have to take money for buying tickets. Return about 9 p.m.


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Będę wdzięczny za wszelkie sugestie i poprawki.

(brak przedimka) trip to the Warsaw is taking place (tu brak 2 slowa) 16th January.
Gathering is in front of (brak przedimka) school.
Everyone 'have' (tutaj 'everyone' oznacza l. poj. dostosuj czasownik do tego) to take money for buying tickets.


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Będę wdzięczny za wszelkie sugestie i poprawki.[/quote]

A trip to the Warsaw is taking place on 16th January. (napisałaś, że brakuje dwóch słów. Napisałem tylko jedno chociaż i to nie wiem czy dobrze. Jakie jest drugie słowo?)
Gathering is in front of the school.
Everyone has to take money for buying tickets.

Czy teraz jest dobrze?

THE trip to 'the' (nie zauwazylam, ale tyutaj bez 'the') Warsaw is taking place on (ja dalabym tutaj THE) 16th OF January.