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I want write review about film The Dark Knight.It was directed by Christopher Nolan.It is one of the most famous movie since 2008.
The plot revolves around mystery person which is Batman.The story is set in Gotham City where crime is rising.Bruce Wayne(Christian Bale) who in the form of Batman fights with mafia.Harvey Dent(Aaron Eckhart) new prosecutor and Jim Gordon(Gary Oldman)help him. In the course of the story, found true opponent which is Joker(Heath Ledger).His riddle and plans on the verge of madness.This movement only introduce anarchy and chaos.
Batman reputation falls.By the end of the story,batman surrenders because impact societies are maximal.
The main characters is Bruce Wayne.Rich person who inherit corporations and house.
Him helps is results curiosity for avenge their parents.Hard nature Bruce only enhances experiences.Another fascinating character is Joker.Insanity and genius this attributes can be defined when you see first plan how to rob a bank.He perfectly manipulates people.Other the most important character is Harvey Dent.At the start of the story,he fights with crime.
But after when he discovers yours dark nature.He becomes Two-Face who kills upon the outcome of a coin flip.
I enjoyed the movie because is unpredictable.We do not know what might surprise us.
The most exciting moment is when Joker threatens Rachel Dawes(Maggie Gyllenhaal)
We can see insanity at character.The character of Dent is very interesting because he has been changing with events.The movie raises important questions about evil which is inside man.We must ourselves answer the question.
To sum up The Dark Knight is a landmark film.Despite commercialism has artistic value.
I fully recommend this movie.

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I want (cos tu brak) write (brak przedimka) review about (przedimek) film The Dark Knight.
It is one of the most famous 'movie' (l. mn - po polsku tez mowisz 'filmow' a nie 'film') since 2008.
The plot revolves around (przedimek) mystery person 'which' (jak 'person' to WHO) is Batman.
Bruce Wayne (Christian Bale) who in the form of Batman fights with (przedimek) mafia . Harvey Dent(Aaron Eckhart) (przedimek) new prosecutor and Jim Gordon (Gary Oldman)help him. In the course of the story, (kto? co?) 'found' (zly czas) (przedimek) true opponent 'which' WHO is (przedimek)Joker (Heath Ledger). His riddle and plans (cos brak) on the verge of madness. 'This movement' (jaki movement?) only introduce anarchy and chaos.
By the end of the story, Batman surrenders because (przedimek) impact (brak 2 slowa) societies are 'maximal' (cos z tym slowem nie tak).
The main 'characters is' ('characters' to l. mn) Bruce Wayne, (przedimek) rich person who 'inherit' (3os.l.poj - he) corporations and (przedimek) house.
'Him' (zle slowo, tutaj HE) helps 'is' (zle slowo) 'results curiosity for avenge their parents' (tego nie rozumiem).
Hard-natureD Bruce only enhances (przedimek) experiences. Another fascinating character is (przedimek) Joker. Insanity and genius 'this' (ale 'attributes' tp l. mn) attributes can be defined when you see (cos brak) first plan (cos brak) how to rob a bank. He 'perfectly' (daj na koncu zdania) manipulates people. Other 'the' (niepotr) most important character is Harvey Dent.
But after when he discovers 'yours' (zle slowo) dark nature, he becomes two-faceD who kills upon the outcome of 'a coin flip' (the flip of a coin).
I enjoyed the 'movie' (nie pisz raz 'film' a raz 'movie' to jedno jest BrE a drugie AmE) because (ale co? )is unpredictable.
The most exciting moment is when (przedimek) Joker threatens Rachel Dawes(Maggie Gyllenhaal)
We can see insanity 'at' IN (przedimek) character.The character of Dent is very interesting because he 'has been changing' (changes) with events.The 'movie' (popraw) raises important questions about (przedimek) evil which is inside (przedimek) man. We must ourselves answer 'the question' (ale jakie? nie rozumiem).
Despite commercialism (ale co?) has artistic value.

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Cytat:
I want write the review about the film The Dark Knight. It was directed by Christopher Nolan. It is one of the most famous film since 2008.
The plot revolves around the mystery person who is Batman. The story is set in Gotham City where crime is out the rise. Bruce Wayne(Christian Bale) in costume Batman fights the mafia. Harvey Dent(Aaron Eckhart)the new prosecutor and Jim Gordon(Gary Oldman)help him. In the course of the story, true opponent is Joker(Heath Ledger).His riddle and plans are on the verge of madness so introduces anarchy and chaos. Batman reputation falls. By the end of the story, batman surrenders because people hate him.
The main character is Bruce Wayne. It’s a rich person who ha inherited corporations and the house. His help is the result of the loss parents. Hard nature Bruce only enhances experiences. Another fascinating character is the Joker. His main features is genius and insane. He manipulates people perfectly. Another important character is Harvey Dent. At the start of the story, he fights crime. But when he discovers dark nature. He becomes Two-Face and kills upon the outcome of the flip of a coin.
I enjoyed the film because is unpredictable. We do not know what might surprise us. The most exciting moment is when the Joker threatens Rachel Dawes(Maggie Gyllenhaal)
The character of Dent is very interesting because changes with events. The film raises important questions about evil which is inside every man.
To sum up The Dark Knight is a landmark film. Has artistic value. I fully recommend.

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