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We all have our ideals and dreams. Thinking wanting and knowing are three words which described todays people. . Nowadays we sometimes hear about high-fliers, very ambitious persons who will do everything to achieve success. They work hard and do everything so that their dreams will come truen but is there any recipe to be successful in life?
Everything depends on us. If we want to achieve something, we have to work hard. We should be optimistic and should not be disheartened by failures. We must enjoy what we do. We should possess a thorough knowledge in the area we are interested. We ought to be open-minded and improve our skills all the time. However, we should not forget about relaxation.
The rule to be at the top is quite simple: work, ambition and optimism. Everything is possible if we want. These three principles can make our dreams come true. You have to be confident, ambitious and diligent. You have to believe that you are the best. Then you can expect you will be at the top soon.
It is true that intelligence, abilities, education and honesty are important in today world.The examples of what is the most important nowadays, that is, power and money show this clearly. A man who has achieved one of these can be happy. But a man with neither money nor power may find coping with life difficult. We sometimes hear about very clever young people who have great ambitions, want to go to university, but they cannot do it. Why? The answer is simple: they cannot afford it. Because of the lack of money their dreams will not come true. Furthermore, their abilities and talents are wasted. In the meantime teenagers who are not keen on learning but have rich parents do not have to worry about anything. And there is a bit of truth in this word. Antoine de Saint - Exupéry once said: 'Working for money we build for ourselves prison full of gold which does not give us anything for what it is worth living'. That is why intelligence, abilities, education and honesty are important. As far as I am concerned I would rather be well-educated and respected than just to be rich.