Things to do at the beach- paragraf

Proszę o sprawdzenie krotkiego tekstu.

There are plenty of things to do on the beach besides suntan and swim. First of all we can enjoy a variety of sports. Surfing, kayaking or diving provide many positive experience. Also fishing is one of the most relaxing things that we can do at the beach. Furthermore, beaches are filled with people so we can make new friends during play volleyball. On the other hand, if we are not ready to feel the strong emotions, we can take photographs. The beach is a great place for getting good photos and those photos will be a nice memory. Finally, there are a lot of fantastic activities that can be enjoyed on the beach.

There are plenty (bez of) things to do on the beach besides suntan and swim. First of all we can enjoy a variety of sports. Surfing, kayaking or diving provide many positive experience. Also fishing is one of the most relaxing things which we can do at the beach. Furthermore, beaches are filled with people so we can make new friends during playing the volleyball. On the other hand, if we are not ready to feel the strong emotions, we can take photographs. The beach is a great place for getting good photos and those photos will be a nice memory. Finally, there are a lot of fantastic activities that can be enjoyed on the beach.


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Nie czytalem tekstu. Odniose sie tylko do 'plenty'.

plenty OF things. - musi tam byc of.

We had plenty to talk about. - po plenty nie ma rzeczownika, wtedy nie ma 'of'.