bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie roozprawki :) Computer games time to learn or waste time??

Nowadys, having a computer is very popular. Computer games are a mojor source attraction for childrenm also Irrespective of the age, everyone can find something for oneself. Some pepole claim that computer games can learn and develop our mind .However, I think that computer games are waste of our time

First of all, peopole who are playing a lot can become addicted to the excitement and fun that video games can provide for him.They may start isolating himself and refuse to do other things like going out with friends or reading interesting books.For this reason people often no use for friendship and they lose a lot of friends.I strongly believed, that peoepole who are sitting at the computer all days do not keep fit. They can suffer from obesity or have problem with their eyesight. That is why their condition and health is getting worse and worse. It can involve in their malaise.

On the other hand, some computers games can be a great part of education for children. For example, When games are in any foreign lang, the children sometimes unknowlingly assimilate new unknown words, and remember them for a long time. The can have a simply way to learn other languages.

To sum up, playing computer games is a good kind of enteirnament. Pepole can play computer games but it cannot be only way spending time.However I am not swat to play computer games, beacause i have always been the type to feel pretty down if I occupy too much of my time on video games .

Nowadys, having a computer is very 'popular' (uzyj inne slowo). Computer games are a 'mojor' (ortog) source (cos brak) attraction for 'childrenm' (ortog) also irrespective of 'the' (niepotr) age, everyone can find something for 'oneself' (zle slowo). Some 'pepole' (ortog) claim that computer games can 'learn' (nie, games sie nicego nie moga nauczyc) and develop our mind .However, I think that computer games are (cos brak) waste of our time

First of all, peopole who 'are playing' PLAY a lot can become addicted to the excitement and fun that video games can provide. 'for him' (niepotr).They may start isolating 'himself' (nie mozesz mowic 'they' a pozniej 'himself') and refuse to do other things like going out with friends or reading interesting books.For this reason people often 'no use' (cos tu nie tak) for friendship and they lose a lot of friends.I strongly 'believed' (daj czas teraz.), that 'peoepole' (ortog) who are sitting at the computer all days do not keep fit.
That is why 'their' (czy mowisz o kims specificznym czy tak ogolnie) condition and health is getting worse and worse. It can 'involve in their malaise' (cos tu nie tak z tym).

On the other hand, some 'computers games' (nie, tutaj computer games) can be a great part of education for children. For example, when games are in any foreign 'lang' n(podaj caly wyraz), the children sometimes unknowlingly assimilate new unknown words, and remember them for a long time. The can have a 'simply' (zle slowo) way to learn other languages.

To sum up, playing computer games is a good kind of 'enteirnament' (ortog). 'Pepole' (ortog - co ty masz do tego wyrazu?) can play computer games but it cannot be (cos brak) only way spending time.However I am not 'swat' (cos tu nie tak) to play computer games, 'beacause' (ortog) 'i' (duza litera) have always been the type to feel pretty down if I occupy too much of my time on video games .

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te błedy ortograficzne to z tego , ze szybko przepisywałam :p widze, ze bede musiala jeszcze troche popracowac... :) Dziekuje bardzo bardzo za sprawdzenie !:)