Hejka. Miałam do napisania email formalny po angielsku jako pracę domową. I napisałam, a jakże, ale bardzo bym chciała, żeby ktoś mi go sprawdził. Sama sprawdzałam już wiele razy, ale sama często nie widzę swoich błędów, więc dobrze by było, gdyby ktoś świeżym okiem na to spojrzał i mnie poprawił. Z góry wielkie dzięki. Aha, i proszę o nie kopiowanie i nie rozpowszechnianie mojego listu.
Dear Sir,
My name is XYZ* and I am 17. I am writting to you in connection with your advertisement about ‘Go-Getters’ – working holiday in Scotland. I am wondering if you could answer a few my questions, because I am interested in this proposition.
First, would you please tell me when this working holiday starts and how long it takes? I am particulary interested in taking part at the turn of July and August and I am wondering if it is possible. Would you be so kind as to acquaint me what will the weather be? It is important for me, because I have never been in Scotland.
Second, your advertisement states that we will earn some money during the camp and I am wondering if you mind telling me how much it will be. I am also interested if there are any age restrictions. I am 17 and I would be grateful if you could tell me if I could work there in this age. Could you also let me know how old that disabled children which I will be looked after are?
Finally, in your advertisement you mention that this job will be a great chance to learn the language. Would you mind telling me what this language is exactly? I am interested in learning scots gaelic and I am wondering if this one will be taught.
Thank you in advance for your help. Please reply as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ*
*nie chciałam pisać swojego prawdziwego nazwiska