Opis wydarzenia.

Temat "Opisz wydarzenie sportowe, które zapamiętałeś ze względu na dobre przygotowanie oraz szczególną atmosferę."

Last month in my town there was a marathon. I decided to sign up for the list of participants and encougared my friend. The run was planneg by Sunday, 5th May. It was fortuitous that the weather was sunny and watm. The day was perfect for such a event.
I was pleasantly surprised that everything start at ten o'clock sharp as it was on the schedule. At first there was a warm-up leading by a profossional coach. Then the marathon began. As we were running I saw the police who protected us form the traffic. On the way there was many points with water or medical facility for that one's who all of a sudden felt ill.
Behind the barriers were standing people who supported the runners and did not let them give in. When I had finished the run I noticed that there were plenty od my friends all around. Almost a half of town society came to take part in the event. Not only my friends congratulated me on ending the run, but also the welcoming strangers were doing it. I could feel the atmosphere of warmth and joy.
That day stucked in my mind as a time fulfilted with positive energy. Everything was propoer done and the participants ware extremely eympathetic. I will willingly partake in following editions.

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I decided to sign up for the list of participants and 'encougared' (ortog) my friend. The run was 'planneg' (ortog) 'by' (zle slowo) Sunday, 5th May. It was fortuitous that the weather was sunny and 'watm' (ortog). The day was perfect for such 'a' (zly przedimek) event.
I was pleasantly surprised that everything 'start' (zle slowo) at ten o'clock sharp as 'it' (niepotr) was (daj tu slowo) on the schedule. At first there was a warm-up 'leading' (zle slowo) by a 'profossional' (ortog) coach.
As we were running I saw the police who protected us 'form' (zle slowo) the traffic. On the way there 'was' (dlaczego 'was' przy 'points') many points with water or medical facility for 'that one's' (calkowicie zle, napisz 'those') who all of a sudden felt ill.
When I had finished the run I noticed that there were plenty 'od' (ortog) my friends all around. Almost 'a' (niepotr) half of (przedimek) town 'society' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo) came to take part in the event.
That day 'stucked' (popatrz sie dokladnie na to slowo) in my mind as a time 'fulfilted' (ortog) with positive energy. Everything was 'propoer' (ortog ale i tak zla czesc mowy) done and the participants ware extremely 'eympathetic' (ortog- zle slowo, masz tu kalke z polskiego). I will willingly partake in (cos tu brak) following 'editions' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo)

I decided to sign up for the list of participants and 'encouraged' my friend. The run was 'planned' 'on' Sunday, 5th May. It was fortuitous that the weather was sunny and 'warm'. The day was perfect for such 'an' event.
I was pleasantly surprised that everything 'began' at ten o'clock sharp as '' was planned on the schedule. At first there was a warm-up 'carried on' by a 'professional' coach.
As we were running I saw the police who protected us 'from' the traffic. On the way there 'were' many points with water or medical facility for 'those' who all of a sudden felt ill.
When I had finished the run I noticed that there were plenty 'of' my friends all around. Almost '' half of the town 'community' came to take part in the event.
That day stuck in my mind as a time 'fulfiled' with positive energy. Everything was 'propoerly' done and the participants ware extremely amiable. I will willingly partake in the following parts.

Tak lepiej? Nie wiem jakiego słowa użyć w znaczeniu "następne edycje/odsłony"