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Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów. Z góry bardzo dziękuję ! :)

Po polsku :
Jednym z najciekawszych i najbardziej znanych kościołów w Bydgoszczy jest kościół Klarysek Wniebowzięcia Najświętszej Maryi Panny, który znajduje się na ulicy gdańskiej. Budynek powstał w 1645 roku. Łączy on w harmonijny sposób elementy 2 stylów : gotyku, renesansu i zawiera domieszkę baroku. Architekt " Klarysek " jest nieznany, ale znamy za to fundatorów. Byli to między innymi mieszczanie bydgoszczy, rada miejska oraz burmistrz. Świątynia została zbudowana z cegły. Kościół jest budowlą jednonawową do którego przylegają zakrystia i kaplica. Początki świątyni związane są z przybyciem sióstr klarysek do Bydgoszczy w 1615 roku. Jej budowa trwała 63 lata. W 1835 roku nastąpiło przesiedlenie zakonnic do Gniezna, a kościół służył miastu jako magazyn. Po odzyskaniu niepodległości przez Polskę w 1920 roku, kościół przeznaczono ponownie na cele sakralne. Teraz w kościele pracują Bracia Mniejsi Kapucyni. Przy kościele działa też Stowarzyszenie "Alwernia", które pomaga osobą uzależnionym od alkoholu.

Po angielsku :
One of the most interesting and the most famous church in Bydgoszcz is the church of St. Clare, the Assamption of Mary, that located on the gdańska street. The build was founded in 1645. It harmoniously combines elements of two styles : Gothic, Renaissance and Baroque is doped. The architect of "Klaryski" is unknow but we know who there are a founders. They were include the mixing of Bydgoszcz, the city concil and mayor Wojciech Łochowski. St. Clare church is nave structure which adjoins the sacristy and chapel. The origins of the temple are associatey with the arrival of the sisters of St. Clare to Bydgoszcz in 1615. It's construction continued 63 years. In 1835, there was a displacement of nuns to Gniezno and the church was used as a wavehouse for the city. When Poland regained it's independence in 1920, the church was again designed for religious purposes. Now, in the church working the Friars Minor Capachias. The Association "Alwernia" also works in the church that it helps people addicted to alcohol.


Cytat: kara6
Po angielsku :

nie, jeszcze nie, ale spróbujemy coś zaradzić.
One of the most interesting and the most famous church > ta konstrukcja tak jak po polsku, więc nie "jeden z najbardziej... kościół"
the Assamption > słownik
that located > gdzie czasownik?
The build > to nie jest budynek
was founded > i budynku się nie zakłada, tylko buduje. założyć można fundację, jak ktoś ma serce.
is doped. > naćpany?
unknow > ort
who there are a founders. > tak nie
They were include > nie
the mixing of Bydgoszcz, > mieszanie bydgoszczy
the city concil > słownik
Świątynia została zbudowana z cegły. > gdzie jest to zdanie?...
St. Clare church is nave structure > tak nie
are associatey > ort
It's construction > ort
continued 63 years. > nie ten czasownik
wavehouse > czyli dom na fale?
the church was again designed > nie ten czasownik
Now, in the church working the Friars Minor Capachias. > tak nie
The Association (...) that it helps people addicted to alcohol. > tak nie
One of the most interesting and the most famous church in Bydgoszcz is the church of St. Clare, Assumption of Mary. It is located in the gdanska street. The temple is was buil in 1645. This church harmoniously combines elements of two styles: Gothic, Renaissance and a little bit of Baroque. We don`t know who is the architect but we know who there a founders. The sponsors were, inter alin, the townspeople of Bydgoszcz, town-council and mayor Wojciech Lochowski. The temple was built with brick. The church of St. Clare is nave structure which adjoins the sacristy and chapel. Temple maintain it`s beginning with the arrival of the sisters of St. Clare to Bydgoszcz in 1615.Construction lasted 63 years. In 1835, there was a displacement af nuns to Gniezno and the church was used as a magazine for the city. When Poland regained it`s independence in 1920, the church was allocated for religious purposes again. The church operates an association ``Alwernia`` which helps people addicted to alcohol.
One of the most interesting and the most famous church (liczba mnoga!) in Bydgoszcz i

It is located in (tak jak po polsku: NA) the gdanska street (duze litery).

The temple is was buil (ort.) in 1645. - nie wiem czy "swiatynia" jest najlepszym slowem. Zostan przy "church"

We don`t know who is the architect but we know who there a founders. - szyk: kim architekt byl, kim zalozyciele byli

The sponsors were, inter alin (lepiej: AMONG OTHERS), the townspeople of Bydgoszcz, (przedimek) town-council and mayor Wojciech Lochowski.

The church of St. Clare is (lepiej:HAS) (przedimek) nave structure which adjoins the sacristy and chapel.

Temple maintain it`s beginning with the arrival of the sisters - zacznij od: poczatki kosciola sa zwiazane, mozesz uzyc: ASSOCIATED WITH

a displacement af (ort) nuns to Gniezno

and the church was used as a magazine for the city. - zle slowo. W poprzedniej wersji mialas dobre - WAVEHOUSE, ktore bylo zle napisane - zamien V na R

When Poland regained it`s (bez apostrofu - to nie jest skrot od IT IS)

The church operates an association (brakuje: WITH) ``Alwernia`` which helps people addicted to alcohol.
edytowany przez sasha_667: 13 paź 2013
Jeszcze to jakos mi nie pasuje:
In 1835, there was a displacement af nuns to Gniezno - zamiast "displacement", moze po prostu: In 1835, the nuns were moved to Gniezno
One of the most interesting and most famous churchs in Bydgoszcz is the church of St. Clare, Assumption of Mary. It is located in Gdanska Street. The church is was build in 1645. This church harmoniously combines elements of two styles: Gothic, Renaissance and a little bit of Baroque. We don`t know who the architect is but we know who a founders there. The sponsors were, among others, the townspeople of Bydgoszcz, the town-council and mayor Wojciech Lochowski. The church was built with brick. The church of St. Clare has a nave structure which adjoins the sacristy and chapel. Associated with church it`s beginning with the arrival of the sisters of St. Clare to Bydgoszcz in 1615.Construction lasted 63 years. In 1835, the nuns were moved to Gniezno and the church was used as a wavehouse for the city. When Poland regained its independence in 1920, the church was allocated for religious purposes again. The church operates an association with ``Alwernia`` which helps people addicted to alcohol.
churchs - ort
church is was build - double nie
who a founders there - what?
wavehouse - po raz trzeci
was allocated - to raczej o funduszach
Tez uwazam ze ... NA ulicy Gdanskiej....
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