Short story

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My story related with communication problem occurred few months ago at my uncle's house.
Because of back ache of my aunt he decided to make an appointment with massage therapist.
But of course he had forgotten to mention it.
When we were sitting in the kitchen, he asked me:
Edmund, znasz jakiegoś dobrego masarza?
Because i knew that my friend's father works in butcher, i immediately gave his number to my uncle.
So he made a call to him. After answering the phone uncle Jan said:
Good morning, I would like to make an appointment.
Try to imagine my uncle's face when he heard in answer:
OK! when we will kill this pig?
He immediately put down the phone.
And just in that moment he realized that he confused the butcher with masseur.
To this day, every time when I remind myself of that, I have a big smile on face.

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My story related with communication problem ___ occurred few months ago at my uncle's house.
Because of back ache of my aunt SPROBUJ INNY SZYK he decided to make an appointment with massage therapist.
But of course he had forgotten to mention it.
When we were sitting in the kitchen, he asked me:
Edmund, znasz jakiegoś dobrego masarza? PRZETLUMACZ TO
Because i knew that my friend's father works in ___ butcher, i immediately gave his number to my uncle.
So he made a call to him. After answering the phone uncle Jan said: /po odebraniu telefonu...???/
Good morning, I would like to make an appointment.
Try to imagine my uncle's face when he heard in answer:
OK! when we will kill this pig?
He immediately put down the phone. /who HE?/
And just in that moment he realized that he confused the butcher with ___ masseur.
To this day, every time when I remind myself of that, I have a big smile on ___ face.
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