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Anna is my cousin , she lived near to my house, so I know her very well. She is a very good example of that hardworking leads to success.
Anna is older than me, so some years ago when I was 15 Years, she went to high school. She was ordinary girl. Anna wasn`t tall , I think is of average height but she was plump. She had got long brown stright hair , which usually she brushed in ponytail. She has got pale pale complexion, blue eyes and short nose with freckles. I remember Ann as very ambiitious person. She was calm and she was spending a lot of time on learning becasuse she wanted study at School Oof Economics in Warsaw. When Anna was 18 years old she was a little shy , she didn`t like go out, she didn`t have a boyfriend. She spend a lot of time on reading books, sometimes she visited me. She passed matura exam very well and she got study in Warsaw.
Last years Anna graduated from Uniweristy and now she is a completly different person. She lives in Warsaw and she got a dream work. She look amazing. Now Anna is thin beautifull woman. Usually she wear elegant clothes. Anna didn`t use to wear makeup but now she always has red lipstick . She has got short black hair. When she live at family home, she didn`t use to go to the clubs , now she often go out with her friend . She is outgoing and self-confident. Moreover, now she is talkactive!
T Think that Anna is a nice person. When I look to her I see happy and satisfed woman. I have always liked her but I think that her change is good for her .

Anna is my cousin , she 'lived' (to znaczy, ze teraz juz nie?) near to my house, so I know her very well. She is a very good example of (napisz tutaj 'the maxim') that 'hardworking' (nie, tutaj 'hard work') leads to success.
Anna is older than me, so some years ago when I was 15 'Years' (niepotr), she went to high school. She was (brak przedimka) ordinary girl. Anna wasn`t tall , I think SHE is of average height but she was plump. She had 'got' (niepotr) long brown 'stright' (blad ortog) hair , which usually she brushed in (brak przedimka) ponytail. She has 'got' (niepotr) (brak przedimka) 'pale' (niepotr) pale complexion, blue eyes and (brak przedimka) short nose with freckles. I remember AnnA as (brak przedimka) very ambiitious person. She was calm and she was spending a lot of time 'on learning' (cos tego nie za bardzo lubie, moze 'studying') 'becasuse' (ortog) she wanted TO study at (brak przedimka) School of Economics in Warsaw.
She 'spend' (daj tutaj czas przeszly) a lot of time on reading books, sometimes she visited me. She passed (cos tu brak, mozna 'her' albo 'the') matura exam very well and she got TO study in Warsaw.
Last years Anna graduated from (przedimek) 'Uniweristy' (ortog) and now she is a 'completly' (ortog) different person. She lives in Warsaw and she HAS got a dream 'work' (nie, tutaj slowo 'job'). She lookS (she-3os.l.poj, koncowka 's) amazing. Now Anna is (brak przedimka) 'thin' (nie, uzywamy slowa 'slim') 'beautifull' (ortog) woman. Usually she wearS elegant clothes. Anna didn`t use to wear makeup but now she always 'has' (napisz slowo 'wears') red lipstick . 'She has' (mozna 'She's) got short black hair. When she liveD at (brak przedimka) family home, she didn`t use to go to the clubs , now she often goES (przypomnij sobie o 3os.l.poj i koncowkach) out with her friend .
Moreover, now she is SO talkactive!
When I look 'to' AT her I see (brak przedimka) happy and satisfed woman. I have always liked her but I think that 'her' (napisalabym THIS) change is good for her .

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