Tekst o mojej pasji

Witajcie.
Będę bardzo wdzięczna za sprawdzenie mojego tekstu. Jest to krótka prezentacja typu 'show&tell', zamierzam pokazać moją gitarę;)

I decided to tell you about my biggest passion - music. I have loved music since I was really little. Just when I started to talking and walking I was singing and dancing. All my younger years I was trying to find my way, so when I was 11 years old I was taking singing lesson, next one year later I started to play guitar and after my 15 birthday I became the student of music school. I was playing saxophone and piano. But now I know what really makes me happy and what is the most important for me - it's my guitar.
You're looking at this photo and I'm sure that you think that it looks very childish. I have this guitar since sever years and some time ago I thought that it looked very boring and that it looked like many other guitars in the world, so I took my nails polish and I started to pour theirs on my guitar. I had so much fun doing it and I was sure that I was making my own art. When I finished I realised that it doesn't look as I expected but I like it. Someone told me that it's crazy, that it's quite like me;)
So when I have some free time, I take my guitar and I play and sing. Always when I listen to the new song I wonder if i can play it and make my own version of this song. Sometimes I play with my friends. Since tree years I teach playing guitar, It's very satysfying for me. I'm so happy that i share my love to guitar with another people..
When I meet people and tell them that I play guitar, they often say 'i want to play it too, but i dont have enough time and i'm not talented'. I think that if you really want to do someting, if you have a dream and you want it to come true, you always find some time. It doesn't matter if you are talented or not, you should do something what makes you happy.


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BŁAGAM! :(

I decided to tell you about my 'biggest' (uzyj slowo 'greatest') passion - music. I have loved music since I was really 'little' (daj slowo 'small'). Just when I started 'to' (niepotr) talking and walking I was singing and dancing. (tu brak slowa, moze byc 'Throughout) all my younger years I was trying to find my way, so when I was 11 years old I 'was taking' TOOK singing lessonS, next 'one' (napisz 'a') year later I started to play (brak przedimka) guitar and after my 15 birthday I became 'the' (zly przedimek) student of (brak przedimka) music school. I 'was playing' (zly czas - played) (brak przedimka) saxophone and (daj przedimek) piano. But now I know what really makes me happy and what is 'the' (niepotr) most important for me - it's my guitar.
You're looking at this photo and I'm sure that you think that it looks 'very childish.' (cos tu nie tak) I have HAD this guitar 'since' (czy nie myslisz ze tu powinno byc FOR, bo jak chcesz powiedziec ze od kiedy mialas 7 lat, to ...since I was 7) 'sever' (ortog) years and some time ago I thought that it looked very boring and that it looked like many other guitars in the world, so I took my nails polish and I started to 'pour' (nie, nie za bardzo, nail polish to maluje) 'theirs' (zle slowo) on my guitar. When I finished I realised that it doesn't look as I expected (dodaj IT TO) but I like it.

Always when I listen to 'the' (z\ly przedimek) new song I wonder if 'i' (popraw) can play it and (dodaj 'I') make my own version of this song.
'Since' (nie, to niema sensu, tutaj For the last) 'tree' (ortog) years I 'teach' (have been teaching) 'playing' (niepotr) guitar (playing).
I'm so happy that 'i' (popraw, zawsze duza litera) share my love 'to' OF guitar with 'another' (zle slowo, tutaj OTHER) people..
When I meet people and tell them that I play (przedimek) guitar, they often say 'i' (popraw) want to play it too, but 'i' (popraw) dont have enough time and 'i'm' (popraw) not talented'.
It doesn't matter if you are talented or not, you should do something 'what' THAT makes you happy.

Terri, jesteś wspaniała. Naprawdę z całego serca Ci dziękuję, pewnie ucierpiały Twoje oczy patrzące na moje pełne błędów wypociny ;) Jednakże bardzo dziękuję, jestem pod wrażeniem, że uprawiasz tu na forum taki wolontariat, to ogromny altruizm.
pozdrowienia;)