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Zadanie: Write an essay which presents advantages and disadventages of going on holiday with friends your own age rather than with your family.
Going on holiday on one’s own is a teenage dream. But has it certainly only benefits? I will consider both pros and cons of going on holiday with friends your own age, rather than with your family.
Firstly, you do not ask for parents’ permission. There will be no prohibitions and injunctions. Moreover, your family will not watch you at every turn. You can for example meet new people, go back to the hotel whenever you wish and no one in your family will comment your deeds. Furthermore, you will be able to do whatever you want. It will be one of the best occasion to organize time on your own way. You will be able to do whatever you want.
On the other hand, your decisions can have the opposite effects. You must remember about consequences because sometimes ravages can be awful or embarrassing. As for expenses, you must save your money. You have your own allowance and parents will not sponsor you. If you lose money it will be your problem. What’s more, if you spend holiday with your family, you will probably experience more valuable adventure. Instead of dancing on discos, you can visit places which can give you knowledge about culture and history.
On balance, going on holiday with friends can both create unforgettable memories and make some problems. Not everyone is ready for holiday without parents. Teenagers should grow up if they want to leave their parents for some time.
edytowany przez kotkimaledwa: 02 mar 2014