Opis muzeum na maturę rozszerzoną

Cześć

Zamierzam zdawać maturę rozszerzoną z angielskiego. Cokolwiek nie będzie to zamierzam to sprowadzić do tematyki średniowiecznej, taki mój konik :) Jako, że liceum już dawno za mną to nie pogardzę radami ogólnymi na temat pracy (jeżeli ktoś się zna). Prosiłbym także o wytknięcie mi wszelkich poczynionych błędów :)

Treść zadania:
Opisz muzeum, które ze względu na atrakcyjną tematykę oraz nowoczesny sposób
prezentacji zbiorów poleciłbyś/poleciłabyś w konkursie na muzeum przyjazne młodzieży

I want to recommend a modern and friendly for youngs museum. This is the most awsome museum ever. An attractive topic like "Medieval ages" is very popular. Almost everyone want to become for a while knight or princess (depends of sex).
This historical museum have a huge collection of various suits, items and the best of - weapons. Boys can see how medieval warriors looks. All of they equipment: sharp swords, axes, long spears and lances, crossbows, bows, swift arrow, helmets, leather armors, full plates armour and the rest of craft from medvieal's blacksmiths and armouries are show in museum. If someone want, he or she can use wooden sword and shield to fight with a friend. Of course it is just fun. Experienced instructor guarantee safely fight. The unique dresses for sure will interesting girls. Hundred years ago fashion was really different than nowadays.
Because it is a modern museum, it offers a short film 5D about life in earlier ages. In the movie we can see how peasants farm they ground and what kind of duties had childrens. The last "thing" in museum are siege machines: big rams, deadly catapults, brutal ballistas and wide-ranging trebuchets are wait for a visitors.
At the end I must say, that professional guiders show all atractions. Nothing, just visit.

I want to recommend a modern and friendly for 'youngs' (zle slowo - daj 2 inne) museum. This is the most 'awsome' (blad ortog) museum ever. An attractive topic 'like' (ja bym dala 'such as') "Medieval ages" is very popular. Almost everyone 'want' (everyone to l. poj tu 3os.l.poj) to become for a while (brak przedimka) knight or (przedimek) princess (depends of sex).
This historical museum 'have' (museum-it-3os.l.poj) a huge collection of various 'suits' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo), items and the best of - weapons. Boys can see how medieval 'warriors looks' (nie, pomieszales l. mn 'warriors' z l. poj 'looks'). All of 'they' (zle slowo) equipment: sharp swords, axes, long spears and lances, crossbows, bows, swift 'arrow' (daj l. mn), helmets, leather armors, full plates armour and the rest of (przedimek) craft from 'medvieal's' (ortog) blacksmiths and armouries are 'show' (zly czas) in (przedimek) museum. If someone 'want' (3os.l.poj), he or she can use (przedimek) wooden sword and (daj tu przedimek) shield to fight with a friend. Of course it is just FOR fun. (daj przedimek) experienced instructor 'guarantee' (3os.l.poj) (przedimek) 'safely' (zla czesc mowy) fight. The unique dresses for sure will 'interesting' (zla czesc mowy) girls. (przedimek) hundred years ago (przedimek) fashion was really different than (daj 2 slowa) nowadays.
'Because' (nie zaczynaj zdan z 'because' lepiej As) it is a modern museum, it offers a short 'film 5D' (zla kol slow) about life in earlier ages. In the 'movie' (albo 'film' albo 'movie' - ale jak juz piszesz po AmE to obydwa 'movie') we can see how (przedimek) peasants 'farm' (zly czas) 'they' (zle slowo) ground and what kind of duties 'had childrens' (zla kolej. slow). The last "thing" in (przedimek) museum are siege machines: big rams, deadly catapults, brutal ballistas and wide-ranging trebuchets (daj 'and all') are 'wait' (popraw) for 'a' (niepotr) visitors.
At the end I must say, that professional 'guiders' (zle slowo) show all (przedimek) 'atractions' (ortog). 'Nothing, just visit'.(zrob to ostatnie zdanie...so don't delay, just visit)

Wow, nie spodziewałem się tak szybkiej reakcji. Dziękuję :) Widzę, że porobiłem trochę 'głupich' błędów, tzn. wiedziałem tak naprawdę jak coś się pisze, ale przez niedbalstwo nie zrobiłem tego poprawnie. Niektóre słowa, które zaznaczyłaś też mi średnio pasowały, lecz próbowałem pisać jedynie z głowy, bez użycia internetu. Teraz poprawiony tekst:

I want to recommend a modern and friendly museum for youth (czy po prostu 'young people'?). This is the most awesome museum ever. An attractive topic such as "Medieval ages" is very popular. Almost everyone wants to become for a while a knight or a princess (depends of sex).
This historical museum has a huge collection of various apparels, items and the best of - weapons. Boys can see how medieval warriors look. All of their equipment: sharp swords, axes, long spears and lances, crossbows, bows, swift arrows, helmets, leather armors, full plates armours and the rest of a craft from medieval's blacksmiths and armouries are exhibit in a museum. If someone wants, he or she can use a wooden sword and a shield to fight with a friend. Of course it is just for fun. An experienced instructor guarantees a safe fight. The unique dresses for sure will interest girls. A hundred years ago a fashion was really different than present days (nie do końca zrozumiałem sugestię, nie jestem pewien czy o to chodziło).
As it is a modern museum, it offers a short 5D film about life in earlier ages. In the film we can see how a peasants farmed their ground and what kind of duties childrens had. The last "thing" in a museum are siege machines: big rams, deadly catapults, brutal ballistas, wide-ranging trebuchets and all are waiting for visitors.
At the end I must say, that proffesional tour guide (teraz ok? Czy może travel guide? Ew. 'cicerone'?') show all an attractions. So don't delay, just visit.

I jak? :)