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Internet blessing or curse?
Could you imagine life without the Internet? For most people the answer to this question is: NO ! . Internet is without a doubt one of the most important inventions in history. However it is obvious, that with each of great patents exist advantages and drawbacks of using them.
Let's start with the good things first. Recently the internet is a huge source of knowledge and kind of a window on the world. We can provide information on almost anything within seconds. Nowadays learning is much easier. Students do not have to sit hours in library searching for the definition or article. Furthermore the Internet is the fastest medium. It allows for the spread of ideas and information at a phenomenal speed. In addition, thanks to the Internet, we can connect with friends or family even being on the other end of the world. We can also relax by watching videos, reading e-books, playing games online, enjoy social networking or shopping without leaving home.
Nevertheless, it’s easy to forget about all world when we are surfing the Internet and this way waste our time. What more is constantly increasing the number of young people addicted to the Internet. Other major threats are: trolling, cyberstalking especially cyberbullying, piracy, identity theft and others crimes. They are a serious danger to all internet users.

musze dopisac jeszcze zakonczenie
z gory dziekuje za pomoc :D
Pokaze Ci gdzie sa bledy...
Internet (brak przedimka) blessing or (brak przedimka) curse?
(brak przedimka) internet is without a doubt one of the most important inventions in history. (nie za bardzo prawda, najwazniejszy wynalazek to byl 'the wheel' nie zaden internet) However it is obvious, that with each of great 'patents' (internet nie jest patentowany , poszukaj inne slowo) (cos brak) exist advantages and drawbacks of using them.
'Recently' (nie wiem dlaczego uzylas to slowo, ono nie gra w tym zdaniu) the internet is a huge source of knowledge and kind of a window on the world. 'We can provide' (to jest zle, slowo w sloeo z polskiego - JA nie mam nic wspolnego z internetem, to dlaczego piszesz 'we'?) information on almost anything within seconds.
Students do not have to sit (brak slowa) hours in (przedimek) library searching for 'the' (zly przedimek) definition or (przedimek) article. Furthermore the Internet is the fastest medium (ale do czego? musisz napisac).
In addition, thanks to the Internet, we can connect with friends or family 'even being' (cos mi to nie gra za bardzo) on the other end of the world.
Nevertheless, it’s easy to forget about all (przedimek) world when we are surfing the Internet and this way waste our time.(zalezy jak na to patrzysz, smoking and drinking wastes time too) What 'more is' (zla kolej slow) constantly increasing the number of young people addicted to the Internet. Other major threats are: trolling, cyberstalking especially cyberbullying, piracy, identity theft and 'others' (zle slowo) crimes.

Musze dopisac.......tak musisz. I zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the)
z gory dziekuje za pomoc :D[/quote]
dziękuję jeszcze raz :3

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