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In recent years more and more[nie wiem czy to nie jest zbyt potoczne określenie] parents have decided to let their children educate at home. The problem of homeschooling has raised a lot of controversy - the real question is what is more valuable[preferable?] for a child. In Poland this phenomenon is still not so noticable but in other countries there are big discussions over this thread.

To begin with it is said that noone will take so good care of a child as parents. A parent knows their youngster's strengths and weeknessess and a bond between them will be always much stronger than teacher's and pupil's one. Another thing might be a family's place of residence - if somebody lives over 50 miles from any major city, he won't enjoy daily journeys and it may be hard to maintain.

On the other hand, there are arguments against homeschooling. Firstly, I'd like to notice that school isn't supposed only to learn people math or biology. The main purpose of going to school is to ensure children's possibilties of growing up toghether. By taking part in school they're getting used to live in a society. If they had not these experiences, it would be much harder for them in a further life. Moreover I'm not conviced if every parent is skilled enough to effectively learn their children.

Taking all this into account I find this idea as quite controvercial. Personally, I'm glad with going to school, because I've met a lot of amazing people, without who my life would be much poorer.
edytowany przez miXUE: 29 kwi 2014
In recent years more and more [ok) parents have decided to let their children ( tu brakuje cos) 'educate' (zle slowo) at home. The problem of homeschooling has raised a lot of controversy - the real question is what is more valuable[preferable?] (obydwa ok)for a child. In Poland this phenomenon is still not so noticable (przecinek przed slowem 'but', to teraz dajesz druga mysl)but in other countries there are big discussions over this 'thread' (nie za bardzo trafnbe slowo).

To begin with it is said that no one will take 'so' (zle slowo, tutaj AS) good (tu cos brak) care of a child as parents. A parent knows their youngster's strengths and 'weeknessess' (blad ortog) and a bond between them will 'be always' (zla kolejnosc slow) much stronger than (cos brak) teacher's and pupil's one. Another thing might be a family's place of residence - if somebody lives over 50 miles from any major city, he won't enjoy daily journeys (ale gdzie? musisz napisac) and it may be hard to maintain.

Firstly, I'd like to 'notice' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo, mozna 'state' 'note') that school isn't supposed (tu brak 2 slowa) only to 'learn' (calkowicie zle slowo) people math or biology. The main purpose of going to school is to ensure children's possibilties of growing up 'toghether' (ortog). By taking part in school they're getting used to 'live' (zle slowo) in a society. If they 'had' (zly czas, tutaj 'do not have') 'not' (niepotr) these experiences, it would be much harder for them in a 'further' (daj inne slowo, no 'future') life. Moreover I'm not conviced 'if' (zle slowo) every parent is skilled enough to effectively 'learn' (drugi raz uzywasz to slowo blednie, - pamietaj, a teacher teachers, a child learns) their children.

Taking all this into account I find this idea 'as' (niepotr) quite controvercial. Personally, I'm glad 'with going' (to jest calkowicie zle, tutaj jak mowisz o sobie, to 'that I went) to school, because I've met a lot of amazing people, without whoM my life would be much poorer.

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