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“Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains several of the minerals necessary for good health and that it is completely free of bacteria. Residents of Saluda, the small town where the water is bottled, are hospitalized less frequently than the national average. Even though Saluda Natural Spring Water may seem expensive, drinking it instead of tap water is a wise investment in good health.”
In the argument above, scientists claim that drinking bottled water is better for human’s health. Even the price is high, it is important to pay more for good frame of mind. This conclusion is based on good, healthy components in Saluda Natural Spring Water.
First, the argument wrongly assumes that the lower number of people hospitalized in Saluda is thanks to the Saluda Natural Spring Water. The research does not consider factors like for example the climate, the size of the city etc. It is impossible to claim that only because of the bottled water citizens are healthier.
Moreover, one must understand that not every tap water is worse than bottled one. According to Newsweek recently research showed that for instance in Poland the majority of mineral water in supermarkets is far more worse than the running water. Of course the water in supermarkets is also more expensive and it is pointless to spend a money on it when the average citizen in Poland has a better water in his tap.
Finally, people can find the minerals necessary for good health in different food. Many scientists say that eating vegetables or fruits five times a day is enough to deliver the body all necessary vitamins and minerals. There is no need to buy high mineralized water because all essential components have already been given to our organisms.
In conclusion, the argument in a health–and–fitness magazine is flawed because it assumes superiority bottled water above tap water. Furthermore, there is no evidence of connection between the health condition of Saluda’s citizens and their water. Before making such statement it is necessary to do more researches.