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It was sunny and sweltering day in June. The sky was cloudless and beautiful. I woke up rested and looked forward to the last week of school. I arranged with Olga. She is the kind of person who is late all the time so I decided to come to it a little earlier. A moment later we sat on the bus. We was going to school to provide important essays which was to determine our marks at the end of the year. In vehicle were to many people which meant that it was very hot. We looked out the window and waited to get to school. When the bus stopped we ran to school so as didn’t be late for lesson. I fell and hurt my knee. It bled and stung like hell. I slowly got up and ran toward the school. It all started when I sit down at my desk and realized that the folder in which it was my essay disappeared. I remembered that I held it in my hands when I was sitting on the bus. I remembered that when I fell essay fell on the sidewalk. When I returned to the place where I lost my folder with my story somebody already took it. I saddened because I put a lot of effort in this essay. It was an unlucky day.
It was (brak przedimka) sunny and sweltering day in June.
I arranged with Olga......(to nie pelnym zdaniem)
She is the kind of person who is late all the time so I decided to come to 'it' (nie wiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) a little earlier.
'We was' (nie, mieszasz l. mnoga z l. poj) going to school to 'provide' (zle slowo) important essays which 'was' (essays to l. mnoga, dostosuj czasownik do l. mnogiej) to determine our marks at the end of the year. In (brak przedimka) vehicle were 'to' (zle slowo) many people which meant that it was very hot. We looked out (cos brak) the window and waited to get to (przedimek) school. When the bus stopped we ran to (przedimek) school so as 'didn’t' (nie, tu masz zle, ma byc..NOT to) be late for (przedimek) lesson.
I slowly got up and ran toward the school. It all started when I 'sit' (zly czas) down at my desk and realized that the folder in which 'it' (niepotr) 'was my essay' (zla kolejnosc slow) HAD disappeared. I remembered that when I fell (przedimek) essay fell on the sidewalk. When I returned to the place where I lost my folder with my story somebody 'already took' (zly czas) it. I (cos brak) saddened because I put a lot of effort inTO this essay.

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