proszę o sprawdzenie szyku zdań w letter of enquiry

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Dear Sir or Madam,



I am writing in response to your advertisement which was published in “ The University Journal”. I am twenty years old student from Poland. I would like to work during the summer holidays. I am interested in your offer and I would be grateful if you could give more details about the job.



First of all, I would like to know when exactly the work on the campus starts and how many hours a day the helpers work. Furthermore, I would like to ask whether any special skills are required when it comes to the organization of the group activities. I am independent and hard-working and open to any suggestions. I love working with children and I wish you could tell how old they are. Moreover, I would like to know if the meals are included in the free accommodation, because the prices in Spain are extremely high. Finally, I would be grateful if you could tell me how much money you offer for the work in the campus and if the travel expenses are covered by your company.
I am looking forward to your response,
Yours faithfully,
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I am writing in response to your advertisement which was published in “ The University Journal” (podaj date). I am (brak przedimka 'a') 'twenty' (lepiej 20) 'years' (year) old student from Poland.

First of all, I would like to know when exactly the work on the campus starts and how many hours a day DO the helpers work.
I love working with children and I wish you could tell (ale komu? musisz napisac) how old they are. Moreover, I would like to know if 'the' (niepotr) meals are included in the free accommodation, because the prices in Spain are extremely high.
Tylko bez 'do' w 'do the helpers work'
Cytat: zielonosiwy
Tylko bez 'do' w 'do the helpers work'

sorry??
how many hours do they work?
how many hours do the helpers work?
I want to know how many hours...
dziękuje wszystkim za pomoc;)
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