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1.My friend’s name is Wiktoria. She is 16 years old .She lives in Kraków . She lives with mum and dad and younger sister. Her sister is 12 years old and is very like her. Her grandmother lives in Katowice and when she is a free school is visits to her. Only then will we see each other. We know from 8 years. It comes to the high school. She learns very well. Always gets the award for good grades in science. Her favorite subjects are English and biology. Often participate in school competitions. She drives to England to his family, so very well speak English. Despite the very large distance we have really great contact with each other and we always have something to talk.
2.Wiktoria is tall and slim. Her face is round. She has got pale skin. Her eyes are blue. She has got long eyelashes. She has got small nose and big mouth. Her ear are small. She has got long, straight blond hair. Wiktoria has a great sense of style and she know how to be elegant and chic. She usually wears dark clothes. She wears trousers or skirts and elegant shirts. She wears shoes or high heels.
3.Wiktoria is intelligent and friendly. When it happens that someone has a problem or trouble always tries his best to help. She is a calm, open and honest . This honesty, unfortunately, is not always perceived in a positive way by some people. but she believes that everyone should be honest with the other person and tell her what she thinks in a given situation. She calls cheerful mood in your environment. Her only drawback is that it can be very stubborn .
4.Her passion is volleyball. She doesn’t like bascetball. she is interested in photography and painting. She likes listening to pop music, but she doesn’t like rap. She is learning the guitar. She likes watching drams and horrors. She also spends a lot of time surfing the internet. She is like schopping and walking . She likes riding a bike because she wants to stay in a shape. She likes reading books. Her favourite book is „zmierzch”. She has a dog. Her dog’s name is Fado. He has the hair of the colour white and black and has black nose. Very much he likes to retrieve.
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