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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Movies are posing significant role in the art. Movies stay beside other sources of art like paintings or music. It is known that different characters like different genres of films. Some motion pictures are dramatic, biographical for people who want to think about meaning of life thanks to film. However movies are also funny, terrified or with action elements for people who want to spend time by entertaining. I prefer serious movies, designed to make think.

Firstly, serious films are often based on real life. Life is really difficult to explain and it is not easy way to do the same life in the movie. However, when producers of film do this difficult task the movie will be piece of art. “Green Mile” is a fair example how motion picture can be based on life. For example, in this movie the audience sees how prisoners are terrified when they are going to die on specified date. It is real sensible because people do not want to die when they know that they will be decease in a couple of hours because of their acts.

Secondly, serious films have a vast influence for people or even can change
people’s attitude for a particular topic. For example, drama motion pictures have the biggest influence for people. The audience sometimes starts to cry when actor is dying in the movie. Sometimes films are stunning audience because the movie is unpredictable and interesting. After this particular motion picture some people cannot stop be shocked and think about their life. Some of them will even change their attitude and they will be changing their life.

However, those movies are not for everyone because some people can be dull, embarrassing and they will not understand some of the drama in the motion picture. Teenagers will prefer action film or movies with romantic scenes. Unfortunately people prefer different genres of movies.

To sum up, movies are important and give an opportunity to spend some time. Serious films should be always for thoughtful audience and these kinds of films are great example of the film art
Movies 'are posing'(zly czas) (brak przedimka) significant role in 'the' (niepotr) art. Movies 'stay' (zle slowo) beside other sources of art like paintings or music. It is known that different 'characters' (nie, tu wystarczy 'people') like different genres of films. Some motion pictures are dramatic, biographical for people who want to think about (brak przedimka) meaning of life thanks to (przedimek) film. However (przecinek) movies are also funny, 'terrified' (cos mi to niegra dobrze...movies are also terrified?) or with action elements for people who want to spend time by (tu brak slowa) 'entertaining' (zle slowo). I prefer serious movies, designed to make (ale kogo? mnie?) think.

Life is really difficult to explain and it is not (przedimek) easy way to do the same life in the movie. However, when producers of 'film' (masz raz 'movie' a raz 'film' - to nie jest to sameo, jedno jest AmE a drugie BrE - musisz sie zdecydowac) do this difficult task the movie will be (przedimek) piece of art. “Green Mile” is a fair example (brak slowa) how (przedimek) motion picture can be based on (wg mnie brak slowa) life. For example, in this movie the audience sees how prisoners are terrified when they are going to die on (przedimek) specified date. It is 'real sensible' (tego nie rozumiem) because people do not want to die when they know that they will be deceaseD in a couple of hours because of their acts.

Secondly, serious films have a vast influence for people or even can change people’s attitude 'for' TO a particular topic. For example, drama motion pictures have the biggest influence 'for' ON (na nimi) people. The audience sometimes starts to cry when (przedimek) actor is dying in the movie. Sometimes films are stunning (przedimek) audience because the movie is unpredictable and interesting. After this particular motion picture some people cannot stop 'be' (zly czas - tu cont.) shocked and think about their (own) life.

However, those movies are not for everyone because some people can be dull, 'embarrassing' (zle slowo, people can be embar...) and they will not understand some of the drama in the motion picture. Teenagers will prefer (przedimek) action film or movies with romantic scenes. 'Unfortunately' (no nie wiem, czy mozna uzyc 'unfortunately - przeciez nie mozemy zmusic wszystkich do lubienia tego samego?) people prefer different genres of movies.

To sum up, movies are important and give an opportunity to spend some (brak slowa 'free') time. Serious films should 'be always' (zla kolej slow) for (przedimek) thoughtful audience and these kinds of films are (przedimek) great example of the film art.

Nie mozesz uzywasz 'movie' i 'film' albo jedno albo drugie. Prosze zrob coz z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the) Musisz sie ich nauczyc uzywac. Zdanie bez przedimka nie jest gramatyczne.

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