Sprawdzenie, kilka zdań.

Witam, chciałabym prosić o sprawdzenie pracy. Z góry bardzo dziękuję ;)

In the future I want to be a psychologist. For me this is a very interesting profession. i can meet a lot of interesting people, see what problems people are facing and make profit. Helping others to solve their problems gives a lot of satisfaction. I think that my personality would be my advantage of this kind of profession. In this work need to be patient and open-minded.
The disadvantage is that more people are not coping with their problems. Some people don't listen to the advice and it is hard to help them.It's hard to find a job or occupation.

learn = nauczyć się
help - musisz napisać 'pomaganie', ewent. 'dawanie pomocy (to others)'
profesonality - nie ma takiego slowa
be a contact - to nic nie znaczy
that are more people - jest niegramatyczne
and hard - brakuje podmiotu i orzeczenia

Lepiej? :)