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Czy te zdania sa poprawne?

A useful solution is establishing more reserves for particular types of animals and protect animals habitats. In this way, animals won’t lose their homes and new habitats will provide them safe and suitable conditions of maintenance of the spacious. Secondly, poaching should be subject to greater punishment. Every year many animals dye by illegal hunting. Also selling and buying products made from animals skins or bones should be forbidden. By doing this, we can cease killing animals which skins are valuable by hunters. It is also a good idea to promote actions for the protection of extinction of endangered animals. Protecting animals is required considerable amount of money. Organising events for collecting money for animals will be a good idea. In this way organisations can affect on people and increase their awareness of the problem. 

Faktycznie. A co z reszta zdan?

poprawilem wszystko, nie wiem czemu nie widac reszty

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Nie mam pojecia. Widze jedynie pierwsze zdanie.

Czy mógłbyś dodać poprawki jeszcze raz?

jak widac, jest problem, witryna ucina wpis

No trudno. I tak dziekuje. Mam tylko nadzieje, ze tekst nie ma az tak wielu bledow.

In this way, animals won’t lose their homes and (brak przedimka) new habitats will provide (brak slowa) them (przedimek) safe and suitable 'conditions of maintenance' (tego nawet nie rozumime) of the spacious (ale czego? tutaj musisz dokonczyc zdanie). Secondly, poaching should be (przedimek) subject to greater punishment. Every year many animals 'dye' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo) by illegal hunting. Also selling and buying products made from 'animals' (zle, tutaj 'animal') skins or bones should be forbidden. By doing this, we can cease (przedimek) killing animals 'which' (zle slowo) skins are valuable 'by' (zle slowo) hunters. It is also a good idea to promote actions for the protection of (przedimek) extinction of endangered animals. Protecting animals 'is required' (co to? popraw) considerable amount of money. Organising events for (daj tutaj przedimek) 'collecting' (zmien troche to slowo) (brak slowa) money for animals will be a good idea. In this way organisations can 'affect on people' (tego nie rozumiem) and increase their awareness of the problem. 

Co ty robisz z tymi przedimkami? (a, an, the) Dlaczego ich nie uzywasz?