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Dear Mayor,
I am writing to express my disappointment disappointment with the liquidate our park and build there new shopping center, and i want to write my proposition to solve this problem.

In our city decided to destroy the park and build there new shopping center. In my opinion it is bad idea because in our town we do not have a lot of places to rest. Many parents go there to walk with kids and a lot of older people are spending there time. Our city is industrial so the park is a last place where we can find some the natural environment. If someone wanted to entertainment, will have to go to cinema or club, but i know a lot of people who want to rest in natural places like our park and they will be disappointed like me.

In my opinion the best option will be build this shopping center on the outskirts of the city. In our town we have excellent public transport so problems with getting there won't be. Therefore our park will be saved, and the people who want shopping center will be happy.

I hope my proposition will be considered positively, and our last place where we can find some natural environment will be saved.

Your faithfully Jan Kowalski

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The Right Honourable .... a nie dear;)

ale moze ten prezydent to taki luzak jak borys johnson

Boris?;)

dla mnie borys :)

Dla mnie obojętnie, don't know - don't care:)

Dear (ja tutaj dodalabym Mr. Dear Mr. Mayor) Mayor,
I am writing to express my disappointment with the 'liquidate' (zla czesc mowy) (brakuje slowa 'polskie 'z') our park and THERE 'build' (zla czesc mowy) there OF (brak przedimka) new shopping center, and 'i' (hello, hello, od kiedy slowo 'I' piszemy mala litera - podaj zrodla gdzie to wynalazles!) want to write my proposition to solve this problem.

In our city (kto? co? pies? kot? ludzie? trzeba napisac)decided to destroy the park and build there (przedimek) new shopping center. In my opinion it is (przedimek) bad idea because in our town we do not have a lot of places to rest. Many parents go there to walk with (tu cos brak - moze ' ich') kids and a lot of older people are spending there THEIR time. Our city is industrial so the park is 'a' (zly przedimek) last place where we can find some 'the' (niepotr) natural environment. If someone wanted 'to' (niepotr) entertainment, (kto? co ? trzeba napisac) will have to go to (przedimek) cinema or (przedimek) club, but 'i' (serduszko, to slowo ZAWSZE piszemy duza litera - nawet w zrodku zdania) know a lot of people who want to rest in natural places like our park and they will be disappointed JUST like me.

In my opinion the best option will be TO build this shopping center on the outskirts of the city. In our town we have (przedimek) excellent public transport so problems with getting there 'won't be.' (calkowicie zle - tutaj...will not exist) Therefore our park will be saved, and the people who want (przedimek) shopping center will be happy.

Prosze zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the) Nie za bardzo wiesz jak je uzywac, a one sa konieczne w zdaniach.

Your faithfully Jan Kowalski[/quote]