Opis obrazka

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Proszę o sprawdzenie opisu obrazka, jak na razie jestem w tym kompletnie zielona i nie wiem czy umieściłam w nim wszystkie elementy, z gramatyki też trochę noga jestem ..

In this picture I can see a young woman, who is sitting on the ground in the park. She hurts her leg and somebody put on dressing. She is wearing a red, sports jumper, black trousers and sport shoes. Next to her is a bike. The scene taking place at sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her is a lof of leaves. Maybe she going to fast and she fall off the bike. I have never been in a situation like the one in the picture. It seems to me that this wound must to hurt, and I don't want to be in this situation.
In this picture I can see a young woman,NIEPOTRZEBNY PRZECINEK who is sitting on the ground in the park. She hurts ZAWSZE SOBIE KALECZY? her leg and somebody put on ALE GDZIE? PRZEDIMEK->>dressing. She is wearing a red, sports jumper, black trousers and sport shoes. Next to herBRAK SLOWA is a bike. The scene NIEGRAMATYCZNE taking place ON A sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her is a lof of leaves. Maybe she going to fast and she fall off the bike. TO JEST CALKOWICIE ZLE I have never been in a situation like the one in the picture. It seems to me that this wound must to hurt, and I don't want to be in this situation.
In this picture I can see a young woman who is sitting on the ground in the park. She is hurting her leg and somebody put on her leg the dressing. She is wearing a red, sports jumper, black trousers and sport shoes. Next to her (?) is a bike. The scene is taking place on a sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because (wokół niej jest wiele liści). Maybe she ride to fast and she fall off the bike. (?) I have never been in a situation like the one in the picture. It seems to me that this wound must hurt, and I don't want to be in this situation.
edytowany przez malymarianek: 13 kwi 2015
powtorz czasy przeszle, bo nie poprawisz tego
In this picture I can see a young woman who is sitting on the ground in the park. She is hurting her leg and somebody put on her leg the dressing. She is wearing a red, sports jumper, black trousers and sport shoes. Next to her (?) is a bike. The scene is taking place on a sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her is a lof of reaves. Maybe she was riding to fast and she fell off the bike. (?) I have never been in a situation like the one in the picture. It seems to me that this wound must hurt, and I don't want to be in this situation.
Napisałaś w sensie 'ona zadaje ból swojej nodze':) pokombinuj trochę.
Może np: The setting is taking place...
lof of reaves, whaaaaaat?:)
to fast = prowadzić głodówkę:) Brak jednej literki robi dużą różnicę w znaczeniu:)
Next to her (?) is a bike. osobiście uważam że jest ok chyba że zaczniesz zdanie od There is...
edytowany przez Aaric: 14 kwi 2015
She 'is' (po pierwsze to co teraz jest, to jest wynik tego co juz bylo - zastanow sie nad tym) 'hurting' (zle slowo) her leg and somebody (brak czasownika) 'put' (zly czas) on her leg 'the' (zly przedimek) dressing. Next to her (?) is a bike. The scene is taking place on a sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her (brak slowa) is a 'lof' (ortog. dlaczego robisz takie glupie bledy?) of 'reaves' (ortog). Maybe she was riding 'to' (zle slowo) fast and she fell off the bike.
It seems to me that this wound must hurt, and I don't (tutaj mozna dodac 'ever') want to be in this situation.
In this picture I can see a young woman who is sitting on the ground in the park. She has to got injured her leg and somebody have put on her leg a dressing. She is wearing a red, sports jumper, black trousers and sport shoes. Next to her is a bike. The scene is taking place on a sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her is a lot of leaves. Maybe she ride too fast and she fall off the bike. I have never been in a situation like the one in the picture. It seems to me that this wound must hurt, and I don't ever want to be in this situation..
She has 'to got' (calkowicie nie rozumiem po co te slowa tutaj sa) injured her leg and somebody 'have' (nie, somebody to he/she - 3os.l.poj) put on her leg a dressing.
The scene is taking place on a sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her THERE is a lot of leaves. Maybe she 'ride' (nie, tu ma byc czas przeszly) too fast and she 'fall' (czas przeszly) off the bike.
In this picture I can see a young woman who is sitting on the ground in the park. She has injured her leg and somebody has put on her leg a dressing. She is wearing a red, sports jumper, black trousers and sport shoes. Next to her is a bike. The scene is taking place on a sunny day, maybe it's autumn, because around her there is a lot of leaves. Maybe she was riding too fast and she fell off the bike. I have never been in a situation like the one in the picture. It seems to me that this wound must hurt, and I don't never want to be in this situation.

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