Wypowiedź - sprawdzenie

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Hej,
proszę Was uprzejmię o sprawdzenie i poprawę moich błędów lub nakierowanie mnie na zmiany :)

I disagree with the statements speaking that „making lists of things to do is a waste of time”. Sure, if someone making this lists and doesn’t stick to them than it’s a waste of time. In my opinion these lists making people who want to hold them. I prefer this form of planning because I think that the lists of things which we must do are really useful. I belive that these lists organize our time because thanks for them we know what we must do and we don’t waste of time on figuring out what we have done. Moreover, these lists we can hang in a important place for us for example on the board or fridge where we often going, so we will never forget what we have done. I think it's a great solution for all people, in particular for those who want to be well organized. I personally use this form of planning, and I'm happy with it because I‘ve never forgot anything. I recommend making lists of things to do because it’s the best form of planning.
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I disagree with the statements speaking that
if someone making this lists and doesn’t stick to them than it’s a waste of time.
In my opinion these lists making people who want to hold them. Nie zrozumiałe;)
thanks for them we know what we must do and we don’t waste of time on figuring out what we have done.
I 'belive' (blad ortog) that these lists organize our time because thanks 'for' (zle slowo) them we know what we must do and we don’t waste 'of' (niepotr) time on figuring out what we have done. Moreover, these lists we can hang in 'a' (zly przedimek) important place for us for example on 'the' (zly przedimek) board or (brak przedimka) fridge where we often 'going' (zle slowo), so we will never forget what we have done.
I personally use this form of planning, and I'm happy with it because I‘ve never 'forgot' (forgotten) anything.
Aaric:
I disagree with the statements saying (teraz jest ok?) that „making lists of things to do is a waste of time”.
if someone making these lists and (dlaczego and jest źle?) doesn’t stick to them than (tu mi chodziło że wówczas jest to strata czasu, więc też nie wiem czemu nie może być then) it’s a waste of time.
In my opinion these lists making people who want to hold them. (tu z kolei chodzi mi, że w mojej opini te listy tworzą ludzie, którzy chcą się ich trzymać)
thanks to (tak jest ok?) them we know what we must do and we don’t waste (nierozumiem czemu bez of, ale ok niech będzie :)) time on figuring out what we have done.

terri:
I believe that these lists organize our time because thanks to (teraz ok?) them we know what we must do and we don’t waste time on figuring out what we have done. Moreover, these lists we can hang in an important place for us for example on a board or the fridge where we often walk (może być?), so we will never forget what we have done.
I personally use this form of planning, and I'm happy with it because I‘ve never forgotten anything.
THEN jest ok. W początkowym wpisie jest THAN (źle)
if someone making these lists and (dlaczego and jest źle?) doesn’t stick to them than (tu mi chodziło że wówczas jest to strata czasu, więc też nie wiem czemu nie może być then) it’s a waste of time.
= jeżeli ktoś robiący te listy nie stosuje do nich to wtedy jest strata czasu....(bez AND)
edytowany przez Aaric: 17 kwi 2015
In my opinion these lists 'making' (to jest zle, ...ARE MADE BY) people who want to hold TO them.
don’t waste (nierozumiem czemu bez of, ale ok niech będzie :)) time on figuring out what we have done.
...don't waste my/your/their time, - myslisz to z 'a waste of time'...
Moreover, these lists we can hang in an important place for us for example on a board or the fridge where we often walk BY so we will never forget what we have done.
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