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Have you ever wondered how your actions inspire others? It is difficult but you need the desire and strength to fight. Well, Tom wanted to be a famous soccer player, but he ended up helping thausands of people to have a better life!
As a teenager he attended the training. Young, strong and athletic boy was successful. To receive the medal, diplomas and all sorts of prizes to one ill-fated day. When one of the matches turned his ankle on the legs. It would appear that it is scary but it favour event his career. The doctors forbade him to play football for the rest of his life. They claimed taht it is too dangerous.
Then his life the best option in place. Had no idea what it will do on the future. As he stated in a local newspaper: "Sport for me was all. Now I have nothing." Daily inundated with lists, not only from fellow but also from unknown people, gave him strength for the next day and to start activities.
Tom decided to transfer acquired before I see the younger players because he was their coach. Showed them that every day is worth its weight in gold. Another initiative was to help others. Opened the foundations and collect money for chrych children. His initiatives stall; the enormity of the job.
Why Tom should be inspired? Because he showe that, although deprived of their dreams may satisfy the reams of others.

translator
czlowiek nie pisze w ten sposob

a mógłby ktoś coś poprawić :)

Błagam
ja nie umiem inaczej pisać tylko tłumaczę z polskiego na angielski używając słownika
:(

Tak?
a jak to bylo po polsku:
To receive the medal, diplomas and all sorts of prizes to one ill-fated day

Otrzymywał medale, dyplomy i wszystkie nagrody do pewnego feralnego dnia.
No wiem nie ma to sensu ale błagam pomóż mi ;:3

napisales 'otrzymywać medal...'
Popraw takie bledy, a potem sie zobaczy.

to receive - otrzymywać

a czy pierwszy akapit jest dobry

To ja poprawiam i wrzuce koło 21 :) jak byś mógł to naprawdę pomóż mi postaram się i sam poprawię :3

Have you ever wondered how inspire others with your actions? It is not difficult, but you need good intentions and willpower. Well, Tom wanted to be a famous footballer, but he ended up helping thausands of people to have a better life!

As a teenager he began the practice sessions. Muscular and athletic boy was to succeeds. He received medals and diplomas to some ill-fated day. When one of the match turned his ankle on the legs. It would appear that it is nothing terrible but event crossed out his career. The doctors forbade him to play football for the rest of his life. They claimed taht it is too dangerous.

Then his life stood up in place. He has not got idea in the future. As he stated in a local newspaper: "Sport for me was all. Now I have nothing." Daily covered with lists, not only from friends but also from stranger people. They gave him power for the next day and to start activities.
Tom decided to transfer acquired before I see the younger players because he was their coach. Showed them that every day is worth its weight in gold. Another initiative was to help others. Opened the foundations and collect money for chrych children. His initiatives stall; the enormity of the job.

Why Tom should be inspired? Because he showe that, although deprived of their dreams may satisfy the reams of others.

Have you ever wondered (brak slowa) how inspire others with your actions?
Well, Tom wanted to be a famous footballer, but he ended up helping 'thausands' (blad ortog - dlaczego takie glupie bledy robisz?) of people to have a better life!

As a teenager he began 'the' (niepotrz) practice sessions. 'Muscular and athletic boy was to succeeds' (tego zdania, jak to ma byc zdanie to nawet nie rozumiem). 'He received medals and diplomas to some ill-fated day' (tutaj nie wiem o co chodzi) . 'When one of the match turned his ankle on the legs' (nie rozumiem tego) . It would appear that 'it' (nie wiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) 'is' (zly czas) nothing terrible but (przedimek) event crossed out his career.
They claimed 'taht' (blad ortog) it is too dangerous.

Then 'his life stood up in place' (tego nie rozumiem - za bardzo po polsku). He 'has' (zly czas) not got (przedimek) idea (tu brakuje pare slow) in the future.
'Daily' (czy to jest sluzaca ktora przychodzi raz na tydzien sprzatac? inaczej tego zdania nie rozumiem) covered with lists, not only from friends but also from 'stranger people' (jest takie slowo 'strangers'). They gave him (przedimek) power for the next day and to start activities.
Tom decided to 'transfer acquired' (calkowicie nie rozumiem) 'before I see the younger players' (tego nie rozumiem) because he was their coach. (ale kto? musisz napisac) showed them that every day is worth its weight in gold.
(ale kto? musisz napisac) opened the foundations and 'collect' (tutaj ma byc czas przeszly) money for 'chrych' (nie rozumiem tego slowa) children. 'His initiatives stall; the enormity of the job' (nie rozumiem tego zdania).

Why 'Tom should be inspired' (zla kolejnosc slow...najpierw modal) ? Because he 'showe' (dokoncz slowo) that, although (ale kto?) deprived of their dreams (kto? musisz napisac) may satisfy the 'reams' (ortog) of others.

Nie rozumiem o co chodzi tutaj. Zdania sa pisane tak po polsku, ze nie mozna ich zrozumiec.

Have you ever wondered (brak slowa???) how inspire others with your actions?
Well, Tom wanted to be a famous footballer, but he ended up helping thousands of people to have a better life!

As a teenager he began practice sessions. 'Muscular and athletic boy was to succeeds' (tego zdania, jak to ma byc zdanie to nawet nie rozumiem CHODZIŁO mi tutaj że jest umięśniony i wysportowanym chłopakiem który osiąga sukcesy). 'He received medals and diplomas to some ill-fated day' (tutaj nie wiem o co chodzi CHODZIŁO mi że otrzymywał meadale i dyplomy do pewnego feralnego dnia) . 'When one of the match turned his ankle on the legs' (nie rozumiem tego CHODZIŁO mi że podczas jednego z meczy skręcił sobię kostke w nodze) . It would appear that 'it' (nie wiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) 'is' (zly czas) nothing terrible but (przedimek???) event crossed out his career.
They claimed that it is too dangerous.

Then 'his life stood up in place' CHODZIŁO mi że jego życie staneło w miejscu . He 'has' (zly czas???? jaki???) not got (przedimek????) idea (tu brakuje pare slow)jakich słow ???? in the future.
'Every day' (czy to jest sluzaca ktora przychodzi raz na tydzien sprzatac? inaczej tego zdania nie rozumiem) covered with lists, not only from friends but also from 'stranger people' (jest takie slowo 'strangers' W SŁOwniku było nieznani). They gave him (przedimek) power for the next day and to start activities.
Tom decided to 'transfer acquired' (calkowicie nie rozumiem) 'before I see the younger players' (tego nie rozumiem) because he was their coach. (ale kto? musisz napisac) showed them that every day is worth its weight in gold.
HE opened the foundations and 'collectED' (tutaj ma byc czas przeszly) money for 'chrych' (nie rozumiem tego slowa CHORE ) children. 'His initiatives stall; the enormity of the job' (nie rozumiem tego zdania).

Why should TOM be inspired' (zla kolejnosc slow...najpierw modal) ? Because he 'showeD' (dokoncz slowo) that, although (ale kto? HE) deprived of their dreams (HEkto? musisz napisac) may satisfy the 'Dreams' (ortog) of others.

poprawiłem i niektórych nie rozumiem dlatego postawiłem znaki zapytania ???? lub niektóre rzeczy są z dużych liter

ach, "chrych"
sam widzisz, że translatora nie da sie ukryc

zmarnowales nasz czas, kolego. Swoj tez, bo mogles napisac cos samodzielnie.

to będzie ill children Proszę poprawcie mi bo banie jutro dostanę

:(

Proszę

ale to prosisz zeby ktos calkiem to za ciebie napisal, czy to ma sens?
Nie znasz tego jezyka i nie przypadasz za nim, nic w tym zlego, daj sobie spokoj, powiec nauczycielowi ze to nie twoj jezyk i tyle. Przejdz na innym na rosysjski czu mongolski albo chinski