Mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić wypracowanie. Z góry dziękuję;)

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Temat: What would you change ar school if you had a chance ?

If I had a chance, I would change many things. First I would limit homework, which is given by teachers for the students. I want introdukcje one hour lunch break between lessons. I would reduce quantity of students' books because they are very heavy. I would introduce lessons, which will help students, who don't know What will they do on the future. I would introduce more experiments at chemistry and physics lessons. Thanks to this lessons will be more interesting and more students will watch out for lessons. I would build a canteen, where students will be allowed to eat something and spend the break. These are all changes that I would like to introduce. The rest is okay.

Z góry dziękuje za pomoc.
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edytowany przez zielonosiwy: 23 maj 2015
Cytat: zielonosiwy
Thanks to thisPRZECINEK lessons will be more interesting and more students will watch out for NIE ROZUMIEM lessons. I would build a canteen, where students will be allowed BEDZIE IM WOLNO? :-) to eat something and spend the break. These are all PRZEDIMEK changes that I would like to introduce. The rest CZEGO? is okay.


Jak powiedzieć, że więcej uczniów będzie uważać na lekcjach, bo gdy wpisałam na internecie wyskoczyło mi : more students will watch out for lessons. Jak to poprawnie powiedzieć ???
W kolejnym zdaniu chciałam napisać mogliby i znowu na internecie wyskoczyło mi: be allowed to. Co powinno być zamiast tego???
O co chodzi z przedimkiem w następnym zdaniu???
A co do ostatniego lepiej będzie jak napiszę: The rest things at school are okay ???
edytowany przez Deszczowa123: 23 maj 2015
more students will be attentive
can eat something
other things at school don't need to be changed
Cytat: zielonosiwy
Bardzo dziękuję ;)
edytowany przez Deszczowa123: 23 maj 2015